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Energetic Carnage-with Sky dancer [squishy muse]
as the warmth of his breath recedes
the chill brings nipples to attention
soldiers of pleasure side-by-side
separated only by cleavage and desire
cold death under her, he draws her life
inhaling her, blossoming her into living nature
soon, he would be full once again
and their love would create harmony
lips wandering over flesh
seemingly mindless but with intent
at the spot where shoulder becomes neck
licking suckling biting absorbing
fingernails press crescents into skin
as breath wavers, paused in space
the urgency held inside a ribcage
mauling to escape
energetic carnage with each passionate sigh
subatomic friction thermometer rising
violently tender caresses rousing desire
divine heat setting souls afire
if I drank your blood and tasted marrow
i still would feel the urgent need to have you
merge, atom-by-atom, with everything you are
i find myself in constant pleading
take me
© 2020 Sky Dancer & Raibeart Bruis
the chill brings nipples to attention
soldiers of pleasure side-by-side
separated only by cleavage and desire
cold death under her, he draws her life
inhaling her, blossoming her into living nature
soon, he would be full once again
and their love would create harmony
lips wandering over flesh
seemingly mindless but with intent
at the spot where shoulder becomes neck
licking suckling biting absorbing
fingernails press crescents into skin
as breath wavers, paused in space
the urgency held inside a ribcage
mauling to escape
energetic carnage with each passionate sigh
subatomic friction thermometer rising
violently tender caresses rousing desire
divine heat setting souls afire
if I drank your blood and tasted marrow
i still would feel the urgent need to have you
merge, atom-by-atom, with everything you are
i find myself in constant pleading
take me
© 2020 Sky Dancer & Raibeart Bruis
Published 24th Aug 2020
Author's Note
Had we been in the same room together, this would would be covered in body fluids...or it would not get written.
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24th Aug 2020 7:10am
25th Aug 2020 2:30pm
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24th Aug 2020 8:55am
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25th Aug 2020 2:30pm
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24th Aug 2020 10:06am
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25th Aug 2020 2:31pm
25th Aug 2020 3:15am
Damn burning poem. You need to keep Sky dancer your hot muse very happy. Keep on writing both of you.
25th Aug 2020 2:31pm
