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IN THE BACK OF MY CAR

When we've been to the bar,
had a glass or a jar,
with you may I go far
in the back of the car,
get you shedding your bra
and going 'ooh' and 'aah'
under light of north star?
If not 'yes' as answer,
does this get me your 'ja',
a 'oui', 'si', or a 'da'?
Written by Solomon_Song
Published
Author's Note
Poem arose out of third line. Imagined international proposition.
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