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YOU ARE MY WORLD

From the very first time I saw you through the visions of my eyes, I knew it was you who truly awaken within me. What has died so long ago within the deepness of my heart. For they say a hush mouth can't be heard yet, I spoke what was on my mind and heart and soul. Yet it went unheard only to fall upon deaf ears piercing, through the night air followed by whispers of my silent tears. For they say love is a very hurting thing, that sometimes it will turn the most deepest and caring heart, so cold and uncaring like a block of frozen dried ice. But yet beneath the surface of my heart laying, between layers and layers of love that hasn't turn cold to the touch of a passionate hand. To hold and embrace as I still have feelings and emotions yet to explore by a rare and real woman. For as our relationship grew slowly it began to grow even deeper than words, can describe or explain for it was you who took the time to reconnect me. To the person I am deep within the depth of my heart and soul. For it was you who took the effort to make me believe, that it wasn't my fault that they couldn't see, the true beauty of my heart and soul and the deepness of my subconsciousness of my mind. For it was you as a woman who gave so much of your time and energy, to help me as a man  see the true beauty of my own  heart and the deepness within my  spiritual soul. For you slowly began to change ME from the inside out to become, the very person that I am now as a man once broken by the way of love. For it was you who saw into me a different kind of man, who deserves to be treated with respect and love and honor. And for that I will always be grateful to you my woman my friend my Queen. I rename the keeper of my heart and soul, as I give to you the key to unlocking the deepness within my heart. For I will be the first to admit, if not for your understanding and support with communications. With commitment and consistency and honesty and truth and trust. I would definitely still be lock behind, the scenes of fault and blame fill with pure destruction and bitterness. With so much anger and frustration that taste bittersweet, letting knowone else enter into the very existences of my heart and mind and spiritual soul. For you have become my favorite part of life and love, for you have become more to me then you will ever know. As you are my saver and inner strength against the world, as you've shown me that I am worthy of being treated, with love and honor and devotion and respect as a loving and caring man, deep in love with a beautiful and strong and intelligent proud woman.
Written by Stoney223 (WOLF BAY33)
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Author's Note
I WILL BE THE FIRST TO ADMIT IF NOT FOR A WOMAN WHO WITHSTOOD, THE VERY TEST OF TIME WE AS MEN'S WILL BE STILL IN THE SAND BOX, STILL TRYING TO FIGURE OUT WHY A WOMAN LOVES SO HARD THE WAY THEY DO, FOR SHE IS TRULY A NATURAL HEALER OF THE HEART AND SOUL, FOR SHE IS THE FOUNDATION OF LIFE ITSELF AS SHE IS THE TREE OF LIFE, SO FOR ALL YOU MEN'S OUT HERE WHO HAS A GOOD WOMAN IN YOUR LIFE, TREAT HER RIGHT AND YOU WILL ALWAYS HAVE A DEAR AND TRUSTED FRIEND FOR LIFE, FOR TREAT HER AS A WOMAN WHO DESERVES TO BE LOVE UNCONDITIONALLY IN THE RIGHT WAY BY HER MAN...STONEY BAY
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