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When poetry doesn't come
feel beneath human thoughts
from earthquake, flood
or locusts stripping arteries of blood—
plagues of pestilence
aborting fetal verse
There you will discover comfort
in light-form—manifestations
eons-old: brilliant as suns
or, soft, quasar pulses—
all within the truth of yourself
Ancient galaxies await—
provide whatever you need
through that dark night of soul—
beacons, pure energy
guiding poetry
home to your heart
~
from earthquake, flood
or locusts stripping arteries of blood—
plagues of pestilence
aborting fetal verse
There you will discover comfort
in light-form—manifestations
eons-old: brilliant as suns
or, soft, quasar pulses—
all within the truth of yourself
Ancient galaxies await—
provide whatever you need
through that dark night of soul—
beacons, pure energy
guiding poetry
home to your heart
~
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Re. When poetry doesn't come
21st Aug 2020 7:30pm
Yeah, I get it. But a little too optimistic for me.
Well, what the hell.
They don't shun me & call me Bad Boy for nothin'. ARF !!
Well, what the hell.
They don't shun me & call me Bad Boy for nothin'. ARF !!
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23rd Aug 2020 4:58pm
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23rd Aug 2020 9:34pm
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21st Aug 2020 7:56pm
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Re: Re. When poetry doesn't come
23rd Aug 2020 4:58pm
Re. When poetry doesn't come
21st Aug 2020 8:32pm
love the hopefulness...
It definitely seems to be the case, at least for me, that inspiration strikes like a lightning bolt.
(Yes, on insomnia tail, too... lol)
mostly when I least expect it.
Ty for sharing
🌹 🌹
—B
It definitely seems to be the case, at least for me, that inspiration strikes like a lightning bolt.
(Yes, on insomnia tail, too... lol)
mostly when I least expect it.
Ty for sharing
🌹 🌹
—B
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Re: Re. When poetry doesn't come
23rd Aug 2020 4:59pm
Thank you, Blue. Poetry never leaves us; our thoughts and/or beliefs just get in the way of its presence. Much appreciated comment. xo
Re. When poetry doesn't come
21st Aug 2020 9:00pm
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23rd Aug 2020 5:00pm
Re. When poetry doesn't come
I agree but it seems inspiration comes in phases and there are dry times and productive times - though I always like to think I can speed up ending a dry phase (like currently, but unsuccessfully). I like the metaphors -- and especially the last two lines carry the comfort of conviction that cycles are a natural part of life and all suffering (however experienced) will also end ... until the next round :))
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Re: Re. When poetry doesn't come
23rd Aug 2020 5:01pm
Yep; it's all cyclic, Josh. I think sometimes poetry likes to read other poetry and study too. Thus it removes itself to do just that, hoping we learn too.
Thank you, Josh. Much appreciated. :)
Thank you, Josh. Much appreciated. :)
Re. When poetry doesn't come
21st Aug 2020 10:55pm
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23rd Aug 2020 5:12pm
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23rd Aug 2020 9:36pm
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25th Aug 2020 3:07pm
Re. When poetry doesn't come
22nd Aug 2020 4:40am
“Dark night of the soul”, John of the Cross.... very similar search. Both are spiritual in their own way. Both are true, both looking for truth within... excellent write A.
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23rd Aug 2020 5:13pm
Re. When poetry doesn't come
Anonymous
- Edited 22nd Aug 2020 10:49am
22nd Aug 2020 10:48am
Some writers believe that poetry lies in interpretation; you merely have to string together some words that sound pretty in conjunction and let the reader do the rest.
For me, Poetry is about what makes sense. And when life isn't making any sense as the connections to this and that aren't being made, then it feels like there is no Poetry holding it all together. If that makes any sense.
Taking a vacation from thought to establish any then seems counter productive, but I guess that's coming from someone who doesn't meditate often enough to get all the clutter out of the way and have a clear channel open.
This is Poetry that gets you seriously thinking about the benefits of not thinking.
❤📝
For me, Poetry is about what makes sense. And when life isn't making any sense as the connections to this and that aren't being made, then it feels like there is no Poetry holding it all together. If that makes any sense.
Taking a vacation from thought to establish any then seems counter productive, but I guess that's coming from someone who doesn't meditate often enough to get all the clutter out of the way and have a clear channel open.
This is Poetry that gets you seriously thinking about the benefits of not thinking.
❤📝
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Re: Re. When poetry doesn't come
23rd Aug 2020 5:15pm
Thank you, Johnny. So true what you're saying about poetry. Much appreciated. ❤📝
Re. When poetry doesn't come
23rd Aug 2020 12:11pm
The dreaded writers block
Build a bonfire with dry scraps of knowledge accumulated while the pen doesn’t move and wait for a spark
Cool write Ahavati 😀
Build a bonfire with dry scraps of knowledge accumulated while the pen doesn’t move and wait for a spark
Cool write Ahavati 😀
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Re: Re. When poetry doesn't come
23rd Aug 2020 5:16pm
Re. When poetry doesn't come
24th Aug 2020 3:42am
Dear A,
Aaaahhhhh. You write truth here and I’m going on search of these ancient galaxies you speak of, yet why do I want to offer you money just to have you write the poem for me? You could say this is what Honoria would have written if she wasn’t such a lazy sod and had a single thought in her head. I think we could get away with it. 😉
Epic spill! and thank you for some solid ideas for getting the mind engaged to create some poetry on my own. H🌷
Aaaahhhhh. You write truth here and I’m going on search of these ancient galaxies you speak of, yet why do I want to offer you money just to have you write the poem for me? You could say this is what Honoria would have written if she wasn’t such a lazy sod and had a single thought in her head. I think we could get away with it. 😉
Epic spill! and thank you for some solid ideas for getting the mind engaged to create some poetry on my own. H🌷
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Re: Re. When poetry doesn't come
24th Aug 2020 2:45pm
Re. When poetry doesn't come
24th Aug 2020 10:03pm
So I’ve on a science space exploration kick these last few days and the quasar pulsing (or pulsars) line jumped me because it shows how powerful these can be.
I think we can always more optimism everyday to feed our daily living, it should be a feeling that we can all spread.
I think we can always more optimism everyday to feed our daily living, it should be a feeling that we can all spread.
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24th Aug 2020 10:40pm
Re. When poetry doesn't come
Anonymous
25th Aug 2020 1:51am
Ahavati my friend........brilliant ink as always........poetry has been my refuge thru time.......wonderful ink........purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re: Re. When poetry doesn't come
25th Aug 2020 2:03am
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Anonymous
25th Aug 2020 2:05am
May the pen be our loudest voice 🌸
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Re: Re. When poetry doesn't come
25th Aug 2020 12:42pm
Re. When poetry doesn't come
25th Aug 2020 4:54am
Sometimes I don't know what to write, but it just means I'm out of balance for whatever reason, just life. When I write, I like to tap into a collective consciousness and that compels me, I'm a little bit of an activist that way, but its been difficult lately to hit a moving target with all the changes facing humanity. But there is a Buddhist saying that, I think, without is within or vice versa. We are what we perceive. And vice versa, we can be the peace we envision and create it. As you said, it comes from within.
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Re: Re. When poetry doesn't come
Indeed it does, PR. Regardless of what's on the outside, it definitely comes from within. Reminds me also of Milton's quote: The mind can make a heaven of hell and a hell of heaven. It really can.
Thank you, my friend. <3
Thank you, my friend. <3
Re. When poetry doesn't come
25th Aug 2020 3:11pm
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25th Aug 2020 3:13pm
Always, Wise Conscious. The first thing out of my heart every morning is gratitude.
Much appreciated. :)
Much appreciated. :)
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25th Aug 2020 3:15pm
Re. When poetry doesn't come
31st Aug 2020 00:59am
In the face of all the absurdity...beautiful, A. All locusts were once grasshoppers...all humans were once?
Peace...Harry
Peace...Harry
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Re: Re. When poetry doesn't come
31st Aug 2020 11:57am
Pure energy, my friend! Pure light energy! Great observation there about the grasshoppahs.
Nice to see you back, Harry. 🙏☀❤
Nice to see you back, Harry. 🙏☀❤
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1st Sep 2020 00:20am
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1st Sep 2020 00:57am
I am too! My Eastar gong and selenite charging slab arrived just in time for the full moon tomorrow! :D
Re: Re. When poetry doesn't come
1st Sep 2020 00:58am
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1st Sep 2020 1:01am
Damn right, my friend! You can't fuck up a gong purchase! Well, you can; but I did my research and heeded my intuition on this one! :D
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1st Sep 2020 1:03am
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1st Sep 2020 1:08am
Ahhh the resonation on this thing is sooo soothing. Now, if my singing bowl could just summon me to wherever it is! LOL!
Re. When poetry doesn't come
31st Aug 2020 9:59pm
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31st Aug 2020 10:49pm
Re. When poetry doesn't come
13th Sep 2020 9:56pm
oh, this made my imagination go wild... we, as co creators of God...ancient, newborn, or something else i don't know... but I want to go back home. Also quasars are a notion that make me feel ecstatic!
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Re: Re. When poetry doesn't come
13th Sep 2020 9:57pm
Yes; you're very cosmically attached to a higher strand of energy.
Thank you so much for the comment! It's truly appreciated.
Thank you so much for the comment! It's truly appreciated.
Re: Re. When poetry doesn't come
13th Sep 2020 10:00pm
the more I try to get a bit more earth bound, the more I shoot up to outer space.. I know I should work on the root chakra.. I know the exercise. but meditation requires slowing down and patience, and i am ... well, a disco ball.
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Re: Re. When poetry doesn't come
13th Sep 2020 10:02pm
See I am the opposite! Completely grounded. I haven't touched the realm you dominate yet!
Re: Re. When poetry doesn't come
13th Sep 2020 10:03pm
I can send you my chakra exercises, but I need a contact form, if you'd be interested in such information.
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Re: Re. When poetry doesn't come
13th Sep 2020 10:08pm
That would be awesome; however, I am not there yet! I'm rooted in and beginning expansion ( had some amazing blessings today ). I will let you know when I'm ready to spread my wings! Thank you!
Re: Re. When poetry doesn't come
13th Sep 2020 10:09pm
oh ok I rushed a bit and already sent you the link :D sorry I'm excited (via PM)
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Re: Re. When poetry doesn't come
13th Sep 2020 10:13pm
It's no problem! I appreciate it. Didn't realize you had it handy to send. My intent was to save you some exertion of time if you had to create it. Thanks!