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Evening's Gaze  

Late evening breeze was reflected in your glittering eyes,
Made my heart sink deep & took me for a ride in clear sky.
You showed me glimpses of an unknown world,
Drank autumn wine with me & played with deceitful words.

Sometimes I can't tell what it is that you're thinking,
I just want to let the scars in my heart go away,
And feel your breathing.
I want to see with open eyes towards summer blaze,
Stop worrying so much & wander within your gaze.

Maybe your tender smile is the only thing that's true,
As you sit next to me & my existence fades into you.
Maybe your doubtful eyes are creation of my own,
But the fear in my heart could never be shown.

As I have a long look in your eyes so deeply black,
Like the shimmering water rippling in dark night lake.
And I only want to keep looking at them in wonder,
If you could you fake your gaze for a little while longer.
Written by Wanderer_Mahmud (Mahmudul Alam)
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Author's Note
Writing after 3 and a half months. Honestly, I feel weird.  
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