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Holding Back
I used to say stuff spontaneously
Spur of the moment
Aging has taught me to hold back a bit
Think before I speak
Not always
More so though
Often it's the right decision
Some of the shit I've said
Years ago
Still getting me in trouble
Spur of the moment
Aging has taught me to hold back a bit
Think before I speak
Not always
More so though
Often it's the right decision
Some of the shit I've said
Years ago
Still getting me in trouble
Author's Note
Now you're gonna wanna know what I said, right ??
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Re. Holding Back
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20th Aug 2020 2:46pm
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20th Aug 2020 8:10pm
My directness is still in check, worries
Read my poem “Direct and to the Point” from a few days ago. My fire is raging ....
We’re you a nun back in the day hon ?
Read my poem “Direct and to the Point” from a few days ago. My fire is raging ....
We’re you a nun back in the day hon ?
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20th Aug 2020 8:24pm
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Re: Re. Holding Back
20th Aug 2020 8:58pm
What was the sex like the first time after leaving ?
Was there a lot of sex in the nunnery ?
I think priests and nuns have more sex than most secular people
Was there a lot of sex in the nunnery ?
I think priests and nuns have more sex than most secular people
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20th Aug 2020 9:03pm
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Re: Re. Holding Back
20th Aug 2020 11:00pm
I’m glad you got out.
What made you go in in the first place ?
I know you’ve written about this, remember reading some awhile back.
What made you go in in the first place ?
I know you’ve written about this, remember reading some awhile back.
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20th Aug 2020 11:12pm
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21st Aug 2020 2:12am
Speak.. this is truth.. every year I grow older, I know this is fact.. cheers..
Dave
Dave
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21st Aug 2020 2:17am
I’m an old fuck so have a lot of years to study humanity or lack there of
Thx Mister
Thx Mister
Re. Holding Back
This poem has been gnawing at the corners of my mind all day. I just had to comment: spontaneous expression (free writing) with no censorship, no editing, no second thought, always appealed to me. I've tried it a couple of times, but I always go back and polish it up, thus defeating the purpose of letting my stream of consciousness flow.
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21st Aug 2020 12:19pm
I get the thought and I write it fast with a stream of conciousness flow. That's where my best content is. Perfection is overrated, raw truths are what people want to read where they are expressing emotion ....
My take
Thanks for the great comment
My take
Thanks for the great comment
Re. Holding Back
22nd Aug 2020 8:07pm
I think as we get older we exercise more control of ourselves, almost foreseeing consequences for words and actions. I used to walk around with a poker face most of the time (I think they call it resting-bitch face nowadays) because I didn't want to show emotion or reaction, so I used to get called conceited (but I was more shy if anything).
Your piece does speak a universal truth of our aging process, acting and reacting with a little more diligence even though at times we really want to speak our mind and let them have it.
Your piece does speak a universal truth of our aging process, acting and reacting with a little more diligence even though at times we really want to speak our mind and let them have it.
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Re. Holding Back
22nd Aug 2020 8:19pm
It’s a yin yang Wally
One minute piss and vinegar
Next minute docile and demure
I was quiet as a kid, now some people wish I shut the hell up!
Their problem , right ?
Great comment Wally
One minute piss and vinegar
Next minute docile and demure
I was quiet as a kid, now some people wish I shut the hell up!
Their problem , right ?
Great comment Wally