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The author encourages honest critique.
25th Jan 2012 5:43pm
26th Jan 2012 1:33pm
27th Jan 2012 11:39am
The lack of punctuation adds a nice tension to the piece. The reader is forced to consider more than one or even two meanings.
The final line, for instance could be:- 'What's left God?' or 'What's left? God?'.
I'm sure there are even more variations. The simplicity of the structure disguises a complex poem.
The final line, for instance could be:- 'What's left God?' or 'What's left? God?'.
I'm sure there are even more variations. The simplicity of the structure disguises a complex poem.
