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Life's A Beach
Having fallen deep into
a mental well similar to hell
my mind dwells
on suicidal sparrows
and giant swells,
not of water
but thoughts
dark ones
that knock you
down and leave sand
in your underware
and a ringing in
your ears.
Get me out of here.
a mental well similar to hell
my mind dwells
on suicidal sparrows
and giant swells,
not of water
but thoughts
dark ones
that knock you
down and leave sand
in your underware
and a ringing in
your ears.
Get me out of here.
Published 18th Aug 2020
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18th Aug 2020 3:28am
Dear N,
I recognize these sentiments and you have described them brilliantly, succinctly and with laser precision. H🌷
I recognize these sentiments and you have described them brilliantly, succinctly and with laser precision. H🌷
18th Aug 2020 3:33am
18th Aug 2020 4:17am
18th Aug 2020 5:52am
Another gritty ... jarring write ... not your typical day at the beach ... displaying again your edgy authenticity ... that keeps me coming back to read you and your poetry ...
18th Aug 2020 12:34pm
It’s not always a fine day at the beach. This piece has a dark atmosphere that can truly be felt.
19th Aug 2020 1:03pm
