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Haiku VI

Lonely and weak man

Standing outside of the world

Swim in the ocean
GEMSimov
Written by GEMSimov
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Author's Note
That was my last haiku, from back when I wrote the set of 6. It's about something, trust me on that one, but what could it be?

Do let me know what you think. I love a good discourse.
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