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"Vibes" ... A Poem written by Big Virge 7/11/2005

Can You Feel ... " My Vibe " ... ?  
Because Mine's About ...  
Connecting Lives ...  
Through Use of Rhyme ... !!!  

I Think THAT Way ...  
Is BETTER Than Fights ... !!!  
 
And BETTER Than WARS ...  
Where Blood Stains Floors ... !!!
 
 
Kind of Like ... " JAWS " ...  
 
NO ... NOT The SHARK ... !!!!!  
 
That ... BIG Retard ...  
Who NEVER Scored ... ?!?  
When Trying To KILL BOND ... !!!  
 
Well ... " Roger Moore " ... !!!  
 
That Flow Was RAW ...  
But Here's Some More ...  
 
I'm Vibing' NOW ...  
To ... African Sounds ... !!!  
 
Those Words Are TRUE ...  
I'm Writing THIS PIECE ...  
in ... My Front Room ...  
 
LATE At Night ...  
Whilst Playing Tunes ...  
 
TUNES That Made Me ...  
Vibe And Write A Piece About ...  
Some LATE NIGHT Vibes ...  
 
Here's ... " The Scene " ... !!!  
 
I'm Kinda ... " LEAN " ...  
 
KNOW What I MEAN ... !?!  
 
I've Just Eaten Some Food I Like ... !!!  
Bolognese ... That Went Down NICE ... !!!  
 
It's Sunday Night ...  
Well Monday Morning ...  
But I'm NOT Yawning ... !!!  
 
I'm ADORNING ... Pen To Page ...  
At A ... FRIGHTENING RATE ... !!!  
 
It's REALLY Late ... !!!  
But Now My Pen ...  
Has Met The Page ...  
 
TRUST ME Folks ...  
 
The VIBE Is GREAT ... !!!
 
 
WRITING Makes Me FEEL This Way ... !!!  
PACK Your Troubles FAR AWAY ... !!!!!  
 
And Let My Words KEEP YOU Engaged ... !!!  
With Wordplay FIT For ... ANY Stage ... !!!  
 
NO TIME For RAGE.  
Just HAPPINESS As I DISPLAY ...  
HAPPY Vibes Like SUNNY Days ... !!!!!  
 
I'm In A Maze of Mental Haze ...  
 
My Use of Phrase ...  
May Seem ... MISPLACED ... ?!?  
 
But Come INSIDE My State of Mind ...  
I'm Simply Writing Using Rhyme ...  
To VIBE With ... YOU ...  
Right Here ... TONIGHT ... !!!
 
 
See I'm ... In The FUTURE ... !!!  
Whilst In ... The NOW ... !!!  
 
I've Changed My Position ...  
Whilst ... Sitting Down ...  
 
Can You ... " Visualise " ... ?  
Are You FEELING The Vibe ... ?  
 
Can You FEEL My Pen ... ?  
As I ... Transcribe ... ?  
 
This Piece Is CRAZY Like My Mind ...  
When It's CLEAR To Think of Rhymes ... !!!
 
 
A Tune's Come On ...  
Called ... " HAPPINESS " ...  
 
Music Helps Me Feel LESS Stressed ... !!!  
Just Like When ... My Pen Transcends ........  
 
At Times Like THIS ...  
I Feel ... GOD BLESSED ... !!!
 
 
I CAN'T Fulfil What's In My Will ... !!!  
To ... Make You SMILE ... !!!  
 
Are You Feeling The Words ...  
I Have ... Compiled ... ???  
 
THIS HAS To Go In My ... " Top Five " ... !!!  
I've Written LOADS So That's ALRIGHT ... !!!!  
Tunes Are Running ... PROPER NICE ... !!!!!
 
 
I Finished The Tape Late On Last Night ...  
And Now It's DONE I Understand WHY ... !!!  
The Tape Is PROPER On BOTH Sides ... !!!  
 
HARDCORE Stuff And ... " Softer Vibes " ...  
I've Made Tapes Since I Was A Child ...  
 
NOT CD's or MP3's ... !!!!!  
I'm OLD School Man ...  
Are You Feeling Me ... ?!?
 
 
I'm COOL With NEW Technology ...  
But Feel It's Something I DON'T NEED ... !!!  
 
I NEED Good Vibes And Hip Hop Rhymes ... !!!  
Rhymes That SOMETIMES BLOW My Mind ... !!!!!!  
 
I'm Writing NOW ...  
ACROSS The Lines of My Notepad ... !!!
 
 
The Page AIN'T Moving Like I'm GROOVING ... !!!  
My Writings' Though ... KEEP On IMPROVING ...  
Just Like My Vocal Chords KEEP SOOTHING ... !!!!!  
 
Ladies KNOW My Voice Is Moving ...  
Through The .... AIR ...............................  
 
Are You Prepared For More Wordplay ...  
Ladies ... Can I Take You There ... ???  
 
Feminine Vibes Are ... OH SO NICE ... !!!  
When We Incline To INTERTWINE ...  
Our Bodies Souls And INNER MINDS ... !!!!!  
 
SENSUAL ... SEXUAL Touch SO GENTLE .........  
Girls ... THAT STUFF Is INSTRUMENTAL ... !!!  
 
In Our .... SEARCH ....  
For Relationships That WORK ... !!!
 
 
This Style of Rhyme Is Built To FIND ...  
A Place of LOVE And POSITIVE VIBES ... !!!  
 
I'm Thinking Have I Got More Time ... ???  
To Share More VIBES Within My Mind ...  
It Would Seem NOT Man That's A CRIME ... !!!!!  
 
My Vibe Though Folks Is STILL ALIVE ... !!!!!  
While I Sit At Home And Write ...  
This Piece of Prose On Sunday Night ...  
 
Well ... Monday Morning ...  
The Date Is Now ...  
 
" The Seventh of the Eleventh " ...  
... " Two Thousand and Five " ...
 
 
So Folks Did You ENJOY The Ride ... ?  
Well NOW It's Time To Say GOOBYE ...  
And YES ... Goodnight ... !!!  
 
But Do THIS For Me Folks ...  
 
PLEASE .... FEEL MY ....  
 
... " VIBES " ...


LISTEN HERE :

https://soundcloud.com/user-16569179/vibes/s-KdNAE
Written by BigVirge (Big Virge)
Published | Edited 18th Aug 2020
Author's Note
Sometimes, just having a pen and pad, food & good music, is enough to inspire, and this was one of those times .....
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