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[2020] Getting His Cheap Frills On
He tugs at threads of discontent
mind-full of the fabric'ated chaos
unraveling
It
suits
his purposes
never above board
and yet always is above the board
like playing God in a way
... that is, if the gods were
juvenile delinquents
thems elves
and not to mention, revolting
but no more than usual in their
third world ugly
sweat shop
Published 11th Aug 2020
| Edited 25th Aug 2020
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11th Aug 2020 4:46pm
Always loved your wordplay: cheap frills, fabric'ated, thems elves ( brilliant ).
You've maintained the theme throughout this perfectly!
You've maintained the theme throughout this perfectly!
11th Aug 2020 5:03pm
Goodly. 😊 Thank you.
Hopefully I will get no hate mail over it being about exploiting children LOL
Hopefully I will get no hate mail over it being about exploiting children LOL
11th Aug 2020 6:10pm
11th Aug 2020 6:17pm
Danny, I imagine you could rock a polyester liesure suit.
* measures your inseam *
* measures your inseam *
11th Aug 2020 9:09pm
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11th Aug 2020 9:12pm
16th Aug 2020 10:53pm
I like when you split these words so that we can see it clearly. Whether it's fantasy or political, it's a freaking great verse.
Thank you for sharing.
Thank you for sharing.
16th Aug 2020 11:42pm
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