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I'm Not Foolhardy Anymore
It started as a joke
But I lived up to it in time
Doing or saying any thing
That came into my mind
Leaving a subtle path of destruction
The color of red wine
Shrugging at embarrassment
I'm still young, everything's fine!
No one took me seriously
So I said, why should I?
But then
You offered up your hand
And told me I could be much more
Showing me respect and care
Like no one ever had before
I found myself on a fresh-laid path
With many open doors
Your love gave me the strength to change.
No, I'm not Foolhardy anymore!
ŠTanzen Lilly August 2020
But I lived up to it in time
Doing or saying any thing
That came into my mind
Leaving a subtle path of destruction
The color of red wine
Shrugging at embarrassment
I'm still young, everything's fine!
No one took me seriously
So I said, why should I?
But then
You offered up your hand
And told me I could be much more
Showing me respect and care
Like no one ever had before
I found myself on a fresh-laid path
With many open doors
Your love gave me the strength to change.
No, I'm not Foolhardy anymore!
ŠTanzen Lilly August 2020
Published 9th Aug 2020
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9th Aug 2020 8:54pm
9th Aug 2020 9:13pm
This is really beautiful and so uplifting! I love everything about your poem! Great job!
9th Aug 2020 9:39pm
This is a very sweet offering, Tanzen. Its essence is one of genuine appreciation and I particularly enjoyed the rhyme.
18th Jan 2021 11:52pm
The transition from girl to young woman - many don't. Good luck to you. Based on your poem, you've taken the 1st step on your journey as an adult.
