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A MAN'S POINT OF VIEW  

As life has its own lesson to learn it comes with a price that the heart has to pay, not only with your heart and spiritual soul but yet with each of your most deepest mind, thoughts and emotions and feelings of the passion that transcends. Your most reminiscing thoughts of the love that you thought YOU, had in a relationship between a man and woman but yet here I am, as I am on the short end of the stick as a man making a confession. But at last here I am as a man broken feeling way beyond repair, as I have myself have left so many hearts the same way shredded to bits and pieces, laying upon the floor for them to be picked up. As they pick up what subconscious pieces of their insanity and humanity, still remains deep within them yet sometimes falling as silent tears staining the texture of their face. For I now know that feeling of true depth and deepness within the equation of the mind and heart and soul, for I now know what real hurt and pain along with the deepness of the suffering. Feels like and looks like as I stare at my own reflection within the MIRROR looking back at THYSELF. For you slowly begin to transform into someone from a different dimension of neither space nor time, slowly stepping into the darkness of silence as you are broken in heart and soul and mind, but yet instead you arise as a different man someone else other they yourself. For long gone is the man broken feeling hurt along with the process of the pain, as he has now become the BLACK CROW that not even his own eyes can recognize. So I deeply understand wholeheartedly why you as women's, after going through what you had to go through for it changes you mentally and emotionally and physically and spiritually. As actions does speaks volumes louder than words, for you are either in or out for a real relationship is about commitment and consistency, and real communications with honesty and truth and trust for this is my CONFESSION.
Stoney223
Written by Stoney223
Published | Edited 10th Aug 2020
Author's Note
I AM NOT GOING THROUGH THIS SITUATION ITS JUST FROM A MAN'S POINT OF VIEW 🤔They say KARMA is a double edged sword that cuts both ways man or woman, for you can't pretend to love someone else...
I AM NOT GOING THROUGH THIS SITUATION ITS JUST FROM A MAN'S POINT OF VIEW 🤔They say KARMA is a double edged sword that cuts both ways man or woman, for you can't pretend to love someone else if you really don't in your heart and soul, for you can't pretend to want to spend your life with someone if you want to go through life going from pillow to post, but what you need to do is truly understand wholeheartedly you have to decide to be able and willing to be honest not just with thyself but with them cause KARMA IS WHAT GOES AROUND COMES AROUND 🤔
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