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Gone
Gone
As I lay here with my thoughts and memories of you
Dark and twisted thoughts run lose inside my head
I'm not sure of what to do when I think of all the things we've been through
All I can say is with all that has happened I feel as though that part of me dead
So as I know I must go on
And as I try to lock these demons at Bay
I have come to terms that you are forever gone
And I grow colder and colder everyday
I was stupid I let you in
And now my heart is hollow
I thought this was a fresh new way to begin
I never thought you could be so shallow
Now there's nothing left to hide
As my demons scream welcome back to the dark side
As I lay here with my thoughts and memories of you
Dark and twisted thoughts run lose inside my head
I'm not sure of what to do when I think of all the things we've been through
All I can say is with all that has happened I feel as though that part of me dead
So as I know I must go on
And as I try to lock these demons at Bay
I have come to terms that you are forever gone
And I grow colder and colder everyday
I was stupid I let you in
And now my heart is hollow
I thought this was a fresh new way to begin
I never thought you could be so shallow
Now there's nothing left to hide
As my demons scream welcome back to the dark side
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Re. Gone
8th Aug 2020 10:22pm
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8th Aug 2020 10:27pm
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9th Aug 2020 3:52am
I do have a good man in my life now these are some old ones I wrote and thank you I will keep writing
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12th Aug 2020 6:26pm
Hi,
I think there is an honest vulnerability to your write that is relatable and engaging. Welcome to the site.
I would be thrilled if you would send an audio reading of this to the site's podcast, The Poetcast Project. I think people would benefit from hearing this and the feature may draw interest to your writing on site. If you would be interested, please send an mp3 or mp4, including your screen name and the poem's title, to:
undergroundoutloud@outlook.com
Member participation is the life's blood of the podcast, so I hope you will consider it.
In kindness,
Daniel
I think there is an honest vulnerability to your write that is relatable and engaging. Welcome to the site.
I would be thrilled if you would send an audio reading of this to the site's podcast, The Poetcast Project. I think people would benefit from hearing this and the feature may draw interest to your writing on site. If you would be interested, please send an mp3 or mp4, including your screen name and the poem's title, to:
undergroundoutloud@outlook.com
Member participation is the life's blood of the podcast, so I hope you will consider it.
In kindness,
Daniel
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Re: Re. Gone
12th Aug 2020 6:31pm
I will consider it this is the first time I've shared my work on a site someone very dear to me gave me the courage to do so
Re: Re. Gone
12th Aug 2020 6:33pm
Well I am glad that you did and that you are here with us Stephanie. We'll hope to hear from you. 💖🙏
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12th Aug 2020 6:48pm
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15th Aug 2020 10:54am
Poem shows the impact of a breakup when left cold and vulnerable. Happy you have moved on.
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15th Aug 2020 2:47pm