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Fake apologies and lies
I'm sick of this pain,
it weighs heavy on my heart and lingers here inside of my brain.
Sick of your apologies they all sound the same.
They don't mean a god dam thing.
Dealing with the same old same.
It's like I'm a chasing an impossible dream,
a mere fairy tale that can never become my reality.
it weighs heavy on my heart and lingers here inside of my brain.
Sick of your apologies they all sound the same.
They don't mean a god dam thing.
Dealing with the same old same.
It's like I'm a chasing an impossible dream,
a mere fairy tale that can never become my reality.
Published 7th Aug 2020
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7th Aug 2020 12:31pm
Dear M,
How did we buy into this fairy tale that only ended up being a tale of woe? How to break this cycle and come out on top? “Dealing with the same old same.“ this feels like the touchstone of your piece. It’s always the same stuff isn’t it? You have such a clear and present manner of language to say precisely what’s needed in getting across your point. I'm sorry whoever this putz is that is creating this sadness in your world. I really hope the new day will bring a new outlook. H🌷
How did we buy into this fairy tale that only ended up being a tale of woe? How to break this cycle and come out on top? “Dealing with the same old same.“ this feels like the touchstone of your piece. It’s always the same stuff isn’t it? You have such a clear and present manner of language to say precisely what’s needed in getting across your point. I'm sorry whoever this putz is that is creating this sadness in your world. I really hope the new day will bring a new outlook. H🌷
7th Aug 2020 12:34pm
I agree with honoria. Your word play is so on point. You precise language exactly brought out the inner emotions. Peace ✌️
7th Aug 2020 1:01pm
7th Aug 2020 1:16pm
