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I am but. . .
A monochrome soul
With tatered wings and dreams
I grope for a prism of light
That would enhance my very soul
Yet often than not
I get out of control
When someone takes me light
Like a piece of meat
That can be dovoured
Then what could i offer?
None much i suppose
A genuine care with soulful joy
A loving heart and with all other perks
You could enjoy 💋
(C)mai8.6.20
A monochrome soul
With tatered wings and dreams
I grope for a prism of light
That would enhance my very soul
Yet often than not
I get out of control
When someone takes me light
Like a piece of meat
That can be dovoured
Then what could i offer?
None much i suppose
A genuine care with soulful joy
A loving heart and with all other perks
You could enjoy 💋
(C)mai8.6.20
Published 7th Aug 2020
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- Edited 7th Sep 2022 7:45pm
7th Aug 2020 2:31am
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7th Aug 2020 2:49am
Awwww that is sweet, thank you! And i am back. . . Writing impromptu, in just a matter of minutes! its gusto 💋💋💋
7th Aug 2020 6:39am
I agree with Danny's comment. The last lines of the poem say I think a man should appreciate in a woman he loves:
A genuine care with soulful joy
A loving heart and with all other perks
You could enjoy 💋
Like the kiss emoticom, which also suggest the other pair of lips and symbolize one of 'other perks'.)
A genuine care with soulful joy
A loving heart and with all other perks
You could enjoy 💋
Like the kiss emoticom, which also suggest the other pair of lips and symbolize one of 'other perks'.)
7th Aug 2020 7:06am
