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Dotted Wings (haiku)
Perch on a leaf
The butterfly spreads its wings
Ready to fly
It gently flaps
Its dotted wings daintily
Like a paper fan
The butterfly spreads its wings
Ready to fly
It gently flaps
Its dotted wings daintily
Like a paper fan
Published 5th Aug 2020
| Edited 6th Aug 2020
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5th Aug 2020 10:28pm
Summer I can't really read this. Did you select Visual Poem in the last option before submitting?
6th Aug 2020 2:27am
Dear S,
This is a really beautiful piece. I love the description and association to nature. It is a tad difficult to make out the words and I’d hate for this to get lost in a blurry shuffle. Is there a way to submit the words separately from the picture? Still, serenely beautiful. H🌷
This is a really beautiful piece. I love the description and association to nature. It is a tad difficult to make out the words and I’d hate for this to get lost in a blurry shuffle. Is there a way to submit the words separately from the picture? Still, serenely beautiful. H🌷
6th Aug 2020 7:08pm
Gorgeous! Simply gorgeous! Wonderful work as always, dear friend! Goes right to my RL.
7th Aug 2020 8:45pm
9th Aug 2020 3:38am
Really sublime. Amidst all the heavy writes, this gave me a tension relieving sigh. Namaste.
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- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
18th Aug 2020 4:25pm
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