Cry baby cry

Beautiful butterfly, may the Sun warm you always and tears never stain your face again
Lovely piece
Ron x

Thank you, dear Ron for the read and comment.  :)

This is so very true, Rohini.  You nailed the deep-cleanse perfectly. The ending leaves one feeling light and airy imagining their own experience.

In the spirit of honest critique you have requested, I would offer the following:

I set off in my li'l boat    
to a horizon distant,      
sailing away to the tune
of soporific note
Flowing along the currents
of [ torrential ] emotions      

I suggest relocating 'of' to their respective next lines to end their current with strong nouns; to eliminate one 'of' in L6, I suggest altering the tense to torrential—this would also play into the consonance of L you have throughout that stanza, lending a rhythmic tone to it all.

Well done; a beautiful little verse of recovery that many will be inspired by.

Thank you so much, dear Ahavati for spotting that out.  I have edited that line.  :)
Originally I had penned it as " flowing along the torrent of emotions" ,  but when I added the line " sailing away to the tune of soporific note",  I thought that I should add the word 'current'  in the former line. But after doing that I overlooked the fact that that the line was disrupting the flow of the piece.  

Thanks once again for your kind input and the RL add.  😊🌷

My pleasure, Rohini.

We all have to cry sometime in our lives to let out our emotions.  Keep on writing.

Thanks for the read and comment :)

Thank you, dear BP.  😊🌷

Beautiful my dear poetess ...

Thank you, dear LDF.  I'm so honoured by the RL add 😊🌹

Beautiful poem!

Thank you so much 😊

We all need a good cry. Wonderful poetry, friend 😁

Thanks a lot for your consistent support, dear friend.  😊

There is a sense of journey, apotheosis and transformation, rising in renewal, throughout the gentle imagery and nuance of emotions in this write that is quite engaging.

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Member participation is the life's blood of the podcast, so I hope you will consider it.

In kindness,
Daniel

Thank you very much 😊🌷

Such a beautiful and emotional "redemption song" of sorts... This one moved me deeply with your incredibly evocative imagery and emotions here... In my opinion, it is one of your best. Love you, my friend ❤️

These words poured into my mind right after one of my crying episodes....
Thank you so much , dear friend for your constant support and kind words of appreciation.  You are a sweetheart. 😊🌷