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Time Goes By
Time.......
........does it really heal
When luved ones leave you behind
to carry on with life without them
as if it could ever be the same
Time.......
........will it give us strength
We all have learned about death
yet when it happens it devastates our lives
makes us feel alone and empty
Time.......
........when church bells chime
There’s words that will never be said
or emotions of luv hidden from another
or maybe words of being sorry now forever silent
Time.......
........is more than just a clock
Time.......
........tick tock
Copyright © 2020 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
........does it really heal
When luved ones leave you behind
to carry on with life without them
as if it could ever be the same
Time.......
........will it give us strength
We all have learned about death
yet when it happens it devastates our lives
makes us feel alone and empty
Time.......
........when church bells chime
There’s words that will never be said
or emotions of luv hidden from another
or maybe words of being sorry now forever silent
Time.......
........is more than just a clock
Time.......
........tick tock
Copyright © 2020 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
Published 5th Aug 2020
Author's Note
Flowers were designed by me 💜
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5th Aug 2020 4:26am
5th Aug 2020 4:34am
Awe Adagio.......I luv when I get a “Bravo!”........thank you so much my friend........glad you enjoyed it.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
5th Aug 2020 5:18am
Love the originality of the design of this ... the repetition ... the spacing ... the poignant message ... slowly and deliberately expressed ... the arrangement is gorgeous as well ... bravo dear poetess ...
5th Aug 2020 4:41pm
Hey Lil.......I’m honored by your graceful words........thrilled you’ve enjoyed this.......unfortunately I design too many of these arrangements.......glad you like it.......honored by the RL.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
5th Aug 2020 7:32am
So beautifully constructed.
I love the way it flows and rhymes.
I'd love to read your next piece.
I love the way it flows and rhymes.
I'd love to read your next piece.
Hey Rick......thrilled for your visit......thank you for such enthusiasm.......makes me smile.......honored by the RL......purple luv & hugs xo :)
5th Aug 2020 8:12am
5th Aug 2020 9:28pm
Hey Ron......thank you for being a purple supporter........I always smile from your visits.......appreciate you always.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
5th Aug 2020 9:39am
Dear F,
“When luved ones leave you behind
to carry on with life without them
as if it could ever be the same “ the absolute pain and feelings of desolation are so palpable throughout this piece. Time, marked by milestones and the speed with which they happen are mindblowing. Your poem is very relatable and lovingly written. Your flower arrangement is also quite beautiful. H🌷
“When luved ones leave you behind
to carry on with life without them
as if it could ever be the same “ the absolute pain and feelings of desolation are so palpable throughout this piece. Time, marked by milestones and the speed with which they happen are mindblowing. Your poem is very relatable and lovingly written. Your flower arrangement is also quite beautiful. H🌷
5th Aug 2020 9:35pm
Hey H.......what heart touching words you leave me to ponder......thank you for tender words and support.......been a florist for 22 years......it’s hard at times......glad you like the flowers......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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5th Aug 2020 9:43pm
Hey BP.......thank you for your outlook on this......luv the visit......purple luv & hugs xo :)
5th Aug 2020 3:02pm
I love the arrangement, Purply'Flowered'Luv. It's gorgeous, and I am sure the family of who received it was very appreciative in regards to your care and talent. That being said, the poem questions more than time, I feel; it also questions self, in that which is still left to do while there is time. That old adage, it's the things left undone that we will regret the most. . .for how shall any know without the trying.
5th Aug 2020 9:49pm
Hey Avahati.......glad you like the flowers........sad reason to design them but I luv it.......you felt deep into my heart reading this.......thank you my friend.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Anonymous
5th Aug 2020 8:44pm
Taking a step back and looking at time spent with and without the ones we love. It leaves my heart a little melancholy at first but then grateful for the ability to love so deeply. You my dear are an amazing poetess..xoxo
5th Aug 2020 9:58pm
Awe Lily.......you should praise me so considering you’re up there with the best of them.......thank you for your never ending support and encouragement........purple luv & hugs xo :)
