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i don’t hate you because you’re christian
i don’t hate you because you’re christian
i hate you because you are unkind
and militantly ignorant
you are cold impenetrable
and unforgiving
i hate you because you are aggressive
you put down others’ talents hopes and dreams
you lack compassion
i don’t hate you because you’re christian
i hate you because
you can’t listen
without judgement
can’t offer comfort
without analyzing and advising
you don’t help
without expecting compensation
i don’t hate you because you’re christian
i hate you because you strike out when you’re in pain
laugh at the pain of others
never skip and dance in celebration
i don’t hate you because you’re christian
i hate you because when you’re near
i feel bad
i feel drained confined and depressed
i hate you because
when you’re close i feel guarded judged and devalued
i don’t hate you because you’re christian
i hate you
because you’re
a narrow-minded selfish human being
© 2020 Raibeart Bruis
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black, straight, lesbian, asian, american, atheist, transsexual, fat, talented, muslim, old, wealthy, hispanic, conservative, disabled, gay, indian, artistic, caucasian, a gambler, liberal, asexual, religious, brown, intelligent, poor, mormon, vanilla, illiterate, young, creative, alcoholic, libertarian, gorgeous, buddhist, lazy, jewish, african, kinky, a hooker, centrist, a soldier, a politician, a priest, a bird-watcher, hindu, a nurse, athletic, a lawyer...
i hate you because you are unkind
and militantly ignorant
you are cold impenetrable
and unforgiving
i hate you because you are aggressive
you put down others’ talents hopes and dreams
you lack compassion
i don’t hate you because you’re christian
i hate you because
you can’t listen
without judgement
can’t offer comfort
without analyzing and advising
you don’t help
without expecting compensation
i don’t hate you because you’re christian
i hate you because you strike out when you’re in pain
laugh at the pain of others
never skip and dance in celebration
i don’t hate you because you’re christian
i hate you because when you’re near
i feel bad
i feel drained confined and depressed
i hate you because
when you’re close i feel guarded judged and devalued
i don’t hate you because you’re christian
i hate you
because you’re
a narrow-minded selfish human being
© 2020 Raibeart Bruis
if you don’t like this poem, try substituting the bold-letter words with any of the following:
black, straight, lesbian, asian, american, atheist, transsexual, fat, talented, muslim, old, wealthy, hispanic, conservative, disabled, gay, indian, artistic, caucasian, a gambler, liberal, asexual, religious, brown, intelligent, poor, mormon, vanilla, illiterate, young, creative, alcoholic, libertarian, gorgeous, buddhist, lazy, jewish, african, kinky, a hooker, centrist, a soldier, a politician, a priest, a bird-watcher, hindu, a nurse, athletic, a lawyer...
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