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I love you but......
I love you,
But I'm not sure how much I can take.
My soul is hurting and my hearts about to break.
I love you,
But I'm not sure I can forgive all the things you've done.
It is painful to realize my thoughts have changed; I used to think you were the one.
I love you,
But it isn't fair for me to put all my effort into us.
In attempt to try and appease your needs I walk on eggshells and try to adjust.
But I'm not sure how much I can take.
My soul is hurting and my hearts about to break.
I love you,
But I'm not sure I can forgive all the things you've done.
It is painful to realize my thoughts have changed; I used to think you were the one.
I love you,
But it isn't fair for me to put all my effort into us.
In attempt to try and appease your needs I walk on eggshells and try to adjust.
Published 3rd Aug 2020
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4th Aug 2020 4:41am
Dear M,
“In attempt to try and appease your needs I walk on eggshells and try to adjust.” none of my business nor my place but...turn and run for the hills! Or any direction that isn’t the subject of your poem. You deserve to be with someone who wants you to be you. You have moxie and talent. H🌷
“In attempt to try and appease your needs I walk on eggshells and try to adjust.” none of my business nor my place but...turn and run for the hills! Or any direction that isn’t the subject of your poem. You deserve to be with someone who wants you to be you. You have moxie and talent. H🌷
4th Aug 2020 2:20pm
I always love your comments! Thank you so much for all your feedback and positivity! You're a great person. With each comment you make, I know that I am heard!
<3 M
<3 M
4th Aug 2020 5:13am
5th Oct 2020 1:15am
...but you can do only so much. Do NOT break yoursrlf over impossible demands, sweetheart.
