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Bits and Pieces
Last night while drinking bourbon
A brilliant poem came to mind
I said I would write it in the morning
You know how that goes
It's missing in action
I've got the parts
Missing the labor
A brilliant poem came to mind
I said I would write it in the morning
You know how that goes
It's missing in action
I've got the parts
Missing the labor
Published 3rd Aug 2020
Author's Note
Never delay what you can do today
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3rd Aug 2020 1:28pm
I hate it when that happens ... that is why I keep a notepad by my bed ... love the gem like look of this ...
3rd Aug 2020 1:35pm
I was watching a concert on YouTube and influenced by past feelings. I couldn’t stop watching to write. Maybe it will come back ....
Thx L
Thx L
3rd Aug 2020 3:26pm
Yes. Excellent balance and tension from the top releasing into the bottom. Well done.
3rd Aug 2020 3:57pm
3rd Aug 2020 9:49pm
3rd Aug 2020 4:23pm
It looks like bits of layered tissue paper. I can’t understand how you make it look translucent and backlit. Love it.
3rd Aug 2020 4:30pm
3rd Aug 2020 8:56pm
I only read the title. and I have to say the ONLY bits and pieces I own are the dirty naughty ones that want to be owned..BOOM! lol yes Im drinking. <3
3rd Aug 2020 9:23pm
4th Aug 2020 5:28am
Dear P,
Eh! What you forgot in words came out in art. This is really pretty. Oh! Almost forgot, got some Widow. Super smooth. She didn’t disappoint. H🌷
Eh! What you forgot in words came out in art. This is really pretty. Oh! Almost forgot, got some Widow. Super smooth. She didn’t disappoint. H🌷
4th Aug 2020 11:36am
This is a new technique, lots of layering
Ah the widow, glad you like, I hyped it a lot. It's interesting how it's smooth upon sipping and then the heat builds in kind of in reverse. The further you go into the bottle the better she gets.
Ah the widow, glad you like, I hyped it a lot. It's interesting how it's smooth upon sipping and then the heat builds in kind of in reverse. The further you go into the bottle the better she gets.
5th Aug 2020 2:31am
This is all my poetry lately. I think you've just illustrated my brain. Scattered and fragmented....
5th Aug 2020 3:10am
