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Start-ache
yes sex would be nice
would love to dive in,
but i think it would best
if we start out as new friends,
yes i know..
“you’re really done with him”,
most times we lose someone
in order to win,
but without a friendship
real change could never begin,
i will build your trust
into loving again,
file the evidence
of loves passed crimes,
let me hold you
until you feel fine,
no memory doubts
will ever come to mind,
an all that baggage
gets left behind,
i sign my name on that dotted line.
i’ve got you my friend,
from now..
to the end of time.
would love to dive in,
but i think it would best
if we start out as new friends,
yes i know..
“you’re really done with him”,
most times we lose someone
in order to win,
but without a friendship
real change could never begin,
i will build your trust
into loving again,
file the evidence
of loves passed crimes,
let me hold you
until you feel fine,
no memory doubts
will ever come to mind,
an all that baggage
gets left behind,
i sign my name on that dotted line.
i’ve got you my friend,
from now..
to the end of time.
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Anonymous
- Edited 20th Aug 2022 10:45am
2nd Aug 2020 7:27am
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Re: Re. Start-ache
2nd Aug 2020 4:27pm
thank you my artistic brother for taking the time to read the piece and to submit a comment..
feedback is so very important
respect
feedback is so very important
respect
Re. Start-ache
2nd Aug 2020 9:33am
This beautifully written and I have to agree it is definitely necessary to start off as friends and take it from there from strangers to friend building a love from within nicely spilled brother poet respect 🤛😎
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Re: Re. Start-ache
2nd Aug 2020 4:25pm
thank you my poetic brother for taking the time to read the piece and your “always on point” commentary 💪🏼😎
you already know
OG Respect ✊🏼
you already know
OG Respect ✊🏼
Re: Re. Start-ache
3rd Aug 2020 4:26pm
Re. Start-ache
2nd Aug 2020 12:50pm
This is a great piece to start and continue any relationship with. I really love this.
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Re: Re. Start-ache
2nd Aug 2020 4:30pm
thank you so very much my poetic friend,
i truly appreciate the read and the feedback,
it is so very important to all of us..
respect
i truly appreciate the read and the feedback,
it is so very important to all of us..
respect
Re. Start-ache
3rd Aug 2020 8:20am
True all the way...
It's best to take it slowly before diving in
.....
Great work brother
It's best to take it slowly before diving in
.....
Great work brother
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Re: Re. Start-ache
3rd Aug 2020 3:39pm
thank you my wise poetic brother,
always good hearing from you
Respect my brother
always good hearing from you
Respect my brother
Re. Start-ache
3rd Aug 2020 7:37pm
Greetings O.G. always a pleasure your read your poems Give Thanks to you I really like this one....
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Re: Re. Start-ache
4th Aug 2020 5:04am
thank you so very much,
truly appreciate your commentary my poetic friend
Always respect
truly appreciate your commentary my poetic friend
Always respect
Re: Re. Start-ache
4th Aug 2020 10:41am
Re. Start-ache
4th Aug 2020 00:29am
Just beautiful OG...and without friendship there is nothing really.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
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Re: Re. Start-ache
he’s back!
thank you for stopping by
always good hearing from you my poetic brother
Love and Respect
thank you for stopping by
always good hearing from you my poetic brother
Love and Respect
Re: Re. Start-ache
5th Aug 2020 11:29pm
Re. Start-ache
5th Aug 2020 9:23pm
Re: Re. Start-ache
10th Aug 2020 12:47pm
thank you sensei, always grateful for your inspiration and pro commentary
👨🏽🎓
love and respect
👨🏽🎓
love and respect
Anonymous
- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
4th Sep 2020 7:40pm
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Re: Re. Start-ache
5th Sep 2020 2:41pm
thank you very much my poetic friend for taking the time to read the piece and comment on it
feedback is very important
respect
feedback is very important
respect
Re. Start-ache
6th Nov 2020 8:02pm
Re. Start-ache
8th Nov 2020 7:04pm
thank you my poetic brother for stopping by and reading the piece and commenting!
feedback is the greatest tool in my bag
OG RESPECT!
feedback is the greatest tool in my bag
OG RESPECT!
Re. Start-ache
27th Apr 2021 4:22am
Re: Re. Start-ache
29th Apr 2021 11:43am
Ljdynamic, thank you very much for taking the time to read the piece and to post the positive feedback
feedback is very important
OG Respect
feedback is very important
OG Respect