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Obligations
Life is nothing
But a series
Of perceived obligations
That wear us down
Until we are nothing
But a frazzled unintelligible mess
But a series
Of perceived obligations
That wear us down
Until we are nothing
But a frazzled unintelligible mess
Published 31st Jul 2020
Author's Note
Just a thought that popped into my head after being pulled in many different directions.
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31st Jul 2020 9:28pm
31st Jul 2020 9:33pm
1st Oct 2024 6:51am
I'm new here. I came upon this one randomly. The word "perceived" makes it all happen. It's easy to forget that even obligations are optional with consequences that may be perceived as the lesser evil. I like it without the last line, as well, but that might just be how perceived obligations make me.
1st Oct 2024 10:56am
