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The Final Judgement
The churning of colliding winds conjures up colossal storms.
The light, so bright and blinding: His spirit alternating forms.
Projected through the crimson clouds, through endless stars and space;
Our Lord returns to signify the ending of this race.
For those who pass His final Judgement, a boundless wonderland awaits;
Accepting God, into their hearts – gaining entrance to the pearly gates.
But for those who succumb to deadly sins, for those whose hearts with evil swell,
A perilous path is pellucidly paved, an eternity to rot in Hell.
The light, so bright and blinding: His spirit alternating forms.
Projected through the crimson clouds, through endless stars and space;
Our Lord returns to signify the ending of this race.
For those who pass His final Judgement, a boundless wonderland awaits;
Accepting God, into their hearts – gaining entrance to the pearly gates.
But for those who succumb to deadly sins, for those whose hearts with evil swell,
A perilous path is pellucidly paved, an eternity to rot in Hell.
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24th Jan 2012 4:06am
Love!
25th Jan 2012 9:46pm
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Anonymous
26th Jan 2012 3:45am
not only short and to the point but great flow,nice job.
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26th Jan 2012 4:10am
Thank you, meme :).
I thought about adding more, but decided it was best as is.
I thought about adding more, but decided it was best as is.
Badass sounding
31st Jan 2012 4:23pm
Yet on the delicate side of Christianity. The wording makes it so much more metal XD
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re: Badass sounding
31st Jan 2012 8:11pm
Indeed. I suppose it was intended to be that way :p.
I really wasn't sure where I was going with this until the end, but once I wrote it out, it sounded good. Anyway, I'm glad you liked it, and the wording :D
I really wasn't sure where I was going with this until the end, but once I wrote it out, it sounded good. Anyway, I'm glad you liked it, and the wording :D
re: Job well done!!!
9th Feb 2012 6:40am
Good stuff
10th Feb 2012 4:50am
re: Good stuff
10th Feb 2012 4:53am
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22nd Feb 2012 7:43pm
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Re. The Final Judgement
3rd Jan 2019 3:36am
For sure. The fucked up part is that many of us know the end game if we don't act right but still act the fool.
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3rd Jan 2019 5:29am