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27th Jul 2020 6:02pm
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Such a powerful piece, I feel your pain. When I became paralyzed my wife who I'd been with for over 20 years dumped me with the parting shot of I CANT LIVE WITH A CRIPPLE I dont understand why people just cast others aside
Sending love and light to you
Ron x
Sending love and light to you
Ron x
27th Jul 2020 6:54pm
27th Jul 2020 6:58pm
No sweetheart all mountains are mountains.
Each different but still difficult to climb
Ron xx
Each different but still difficult to climb
Ron xx
27th Jul 2020 7:53pm
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28th Jul 2020 1:29am
Oh my.. I loved the ending my sweetness.. this is what I call a poetic soft tease to the senses, very nice
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28th Jul 2020 8:50am
An emotionally powerful poem. You set this up with poetic finesse and brought it home at the end. Bravissimo.
XoXoXo
John
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John
28th Jul 2020 1:37pm
