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Hey Stranger
when we first met my heart knew you
from somewhere in time and sang
“Hey Baby......whoooo la la!”
something feels so familiar about you
but my mind sensibly dismisses it
“Hey Flower......he’s a stranger for sure!”
I’ve never seen your face
I’ve never held your hand
I’ve never felt your lips
I’ve never kissed your smile
I’ve never heard your voice
I’ve never known your touch
then my heart flip flops suddenly
with a jester of your kindness
“Hey Handsome......boom, bang, bonk!”
of course my mind was quick to interrupt
without pondering any excitement
“Hey Sillies.......he’s all in your dreams!”
so I scurry to get in bed and change
into sheer purple lace and bows
quickly asleep in a world of imagination
so happy having a good night
sleep I awakened singin.......
“Hey Dream Luver.......!”
Copyright © 2020 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
from somewhere in time and sang
“Hey Baby......whoooo la la!”
something feels so familiar about you
but my mind sensibly dismisses it
“Hey Flower......he’s a stranger for sure!”
I’ve never seen your face
I’ve never held your hand
I’ve never felt your lips
I’ve never kissed your smile
I’ve never heard your voice
I’ve never known your touch
then my heart flip flops suddenly
with a jester of your kindness
“Hey Handsome......boom, bang, bonk!”
of course my mind was quick to interrupt
without pondering any excitement
“Hey Sillies.......he’s all in your dreams!”
so I scurry to get in bed and change
into sheer purple lace and bows
quickly asleep in a world of imagination
so happy having a good night
sleep I awakened singin.......
“Hey Dream Luver.......!”
Copyright © 2020 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
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Re. Hey Stranger
26th Jul 2020 3:03am
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2nd Aug 2020 11:30pm
Hey Asper.......I always appreciate your support and thrilled knowing you like my inks........thank you........purple luv & hugs xo :)
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26th Jul 2020 3:22am
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2nd Aug 2020 11:56pm
Re. Hey Stranger
26th Jul 2020 3:28am
Beautiful and the use of Purple lace gets my vote my purple poetress
Great job
Ron xx
Great job
Ron xx
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Hey Ron......got to het the purple in there Lol! Glad you liked it...,.,thank you purple friend......honored by the RL.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Hey Stranger
26th Jul 2020 1:16pm
Beautifully written with a sensual flare nicely done poetess..respect enjoy your day today 🙏🤗
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3rd Aug 2020 2:18am
Hey Stoney........always feel warmth in your comments.......honored for the RL and respect back at ya.......thank you my friend.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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3rd Aug 2020 4:03pm
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26th Jul 2020 3:45pm
Hahaha! Wonderfully clever, Purple'd Luv! I was not expecting that ending. :D
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3rd Aug 2020 2:41am
Hey Avahati........thought I’d write something different.......I had fun with this one........hope the ending made you laugh.......thank you.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re: Re. Hey Stranger
3rd Aug 2020 2:43am
Hey BP......good to see you.......one of my fav lines as well......I’ve used it a few times........thank you for your visit.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Hey Stranger
28th Jul 2020 2:00am
Beautiful. I think that pretty much sums it up. Your writes create an atmosphere of love and tenderness. Always a joy
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3rd Aug 2020 2:45am
Hey Soul......what an honor to see you smile upon my ink once again.......I’m happy you’ve enjoyed this........thank you for your visit......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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1st Aug 2020 6:17pm
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3rd Aug 2020 2:46am
Hey Robert.......always thrilled when I see you back here.......hope is well and healthy with you........thank you........purple luv & hugs xo :)
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19th Oct 2020 11:37pm
Re. Hey Stranger
Hey Flower... there's nothing wrong in having nice dreams. It makes up for all the bad ones! I do like this write cos it has a really positive feel about it. 😊
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3rd Aug 2020 2:48am
Hey Billy.......thank you for the positive words you’ve left me........I luv to dream most the time.......I do get night terrors time to time.......haven’t in awhile though........purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Hey Stranger
3rd Aug 2020 6:35pm
I call it the knack and you have it. You have words with well placed visions.
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3rd Aug 2020 6:38pm
Hey Adagio.......you honor me with such graceful praise........thank you.......I try to write as visual as I can feel my words.......purple luv & hugs xo :)