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Hearts In Harmony (Collab between BP & Flower)
the waterfall gentle calls the river
"wait for me and I will join you",
how we separated why worry
we are again together as one
feeling power in whispering water
forces of nature compassionately
intertwining into each other’s space
singing a luv song that needs no words
through turn and twist flowing
mixing over and over again,
you, me, our song still sounds
with desire, never again separated
although our life paths became divided
looking into a river of passion and calmness
there will never be one reflection seen
our hearts will forever sing in harmony
Copyright © 2020 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
"wait for me and I will join you",
how we separated why worry
we are again together as one
feeling power in whispering water
forces of nature compassionately
intertwining into each other’s space
singing a luv song that needs no words
through turn and twist flowing
mixing over and over again,
you, me, our song still sounds
with desire, never again separated
although our life paths became divided
looking into a river of passion and calmness
there will never be one reflection seen
our hearts will forever sing in harmony
Copyright © 2020 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
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Re. Hearts In Harmony (Collab between BP & Flower)
24th Jul 2020 1:33am
Re: Re. Hearts In Harmony (Collab between BP & Flower)
24th Jul 2020 1:42am
Hey Asper.......thank you for visiting our collab........BP is a great Poet......he made it easy.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Hearts In Harmony (Collab between BP & Flower)
Beautiful but sad my PURPLE POETRESS
Lovely work
The pain of loss and decay, no matter the separation theres always a part of you with them and them with you
Ron xx
Lovely work
The pain of loss and decay, no matter the separation theres always a part of you with them and them with you
Ron xx
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Re: Re. Hearts In Harmony (Collab between BP & Flower)
24th Jul 2020 1:45am
Hey Ron........you’re words personally touched me deeply........there is a soul that will always be apart of me........appreciate your insight very much.......thank you.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Hearts In Harmony (Collab between BP & Flower)
24th Jul 2020 3:22am
Re: Re. Hearts In Harmony (Collab between BP & Flower)
25th Jul 2020 1:40am
Hey Lily, thank you.......glad you enjoyed our shared pen........purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Hearts In Harmony (Collab between BP & Flower)
24th Jul 2020 9:06am
Re: Re. Hearts In Harmony (Collab between BP & Flower)
Hey Faith......always a thrill to see you upon my ink......BP made it easy to write with......Thank you.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re: Re. Hearts In Harmony (Collab between BP & Flower)
25th Jul 2020 8:36am
Thank you! You're so sweet! Two great poets doing a collab! It doesn't get any better than that. You two were amazing! Love,
Faith
Faith
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Re. Hearts In Harmony (Collab between BP & Flower)
24th Jul 2020 10:49pm
What a lovely collaboration, Purple'dLuv. It's reflective ( no pun intended ) of a gentle acceptance an letting go that brings peace and hope.
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Re: Re. Hearts In Harmony (Collab between BP & Flower)
25th Jul 2020 1:47am
Hey Avahati........thank you for your visit........I’m glad you felt the hope.......appreciate you.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Hearts In Harmony (Collab between BP & Flower)
25th Jul 2020 1:42am
I love when a collaboration is done like this without pointing out or highlighting who wrote what, it flows together like water and becomes one voice. Voices raised together harmonize. 💖🙏
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Re: Re. Hearts In Harmony (Collab between BP & Flower)
25th Jul 2020 2:01am
Hey Daniel.......thank you for sharing your thoughts with us.......I’m glad it flows all together........appreciate you.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Hearts In Harmony (Collab between BP & Flower)
25th Jul 2020 11:47pm
Verses 2 & 3 are pretty good, although it's all pretty good really. One feeds into the other.
I really feel the teamwork here in more ways than one.
I really feel the teamwork here in more ways than one.
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Re: Re. Hearts In Harmony (Collab between BP & Flower)
25th Jul 2020 11:51pm
Hey Billy.......thank you so much for sharing your thoughts with us.........always appreciate your visits.........I like it all Lol! Purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Hearts In Harmony (Collab between BP & Flower)
1st Aug 2020 12:42pm
It's a wonderful collab! I very much enjoyed this beautiful creative poem.
Very well done both of you. 👍🏼😊🌹
Very well done both of you. 👍🏼😊🌹
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Re: Re. Hearts In Harmony (Collab between BP & Flower)
2nd Aug 2020 10:28pm
Hey Dreamz.......thank you for smiling upon this ink.......thrilled you’ve enjoyed it......purple luv & hugs xo :)