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Deduced By Deuce
She said GOD was her Ace & I her Deuce
Cherishing & loving me as her papoose
I've deduced that produce expired over time
My unfortunate descent remains on my mind
Unable to climb to the peak of the mountain
Show's over cause Jehovah closed her curtain
I'm certain atonement wasn't on her agenda
That thought rejected & returned to sender
Forever her venom will poison my psyche
Invading my inner thoughts almost daily
Her words readily available for me to read
As a hemophiliac's wound, I continue to bleed
Cherishing & loving me as her papoose
I've deduced that produce expired over time
My unfortunate descent remains on my mind
Unable to climb to the peak of the mountain
Show's over cause Jehovah closed her curtain
I'm certain atonement wasn't on her agenda
That thought rejected & returned to sender
Forever her venom will poison my psyche
Invading my inner thoughts almost daily
Her words readily available for me to read
As a hemophiliac's wound, I continue to bleed
Published 23rd Jul 2020
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24th Jul 2020 00:39am
Wish it was some more lines or I read it too fast lol Give Thanks to you PEACE!!!!
24th Jul 2020 4:29am
24th Jul 2020 10:33am
You took me back in my own past with this piece so powerful and thought provoking for those few lines spoke volumes of truth respect brother poet
30th Jul 2020 5:20pm
So sad, so true for many. She rejected herself, in a way.
God bless and comfort you...💎🌹👏🥺
God bless and comfort you...💎🌹👏🥺
7th Aug 2020 2:29pm
"that thought rejected & returned to sender " --I know just what you are going through. Those we struggle with and against or who struggle against us the most remain with us forever--frustrated love lasts forever. In old age it produces humility and understanding, so you can look forward to that at least.
10th Aug 2020 3:56pm
