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REDEMPTION OF A WOMAN

Why when you look at yourself in the mirror on the wall and look at your reflection, why you don't see that which I see of you as a woman for is it, because of the fragments of pieces broken into tiny crystals of glass. That once was parts of your heart and soul that you trusted to share with someone, who you truly thought felt the same way you do yet to them you were only invisible like a faded image of once upon a time. Why when you look into the depth of your subconsciousness you try so hard to block, out the memories that seems to haunt you reaching into the deepness of your heart and soul. Yet the hurt and pain and suffering seems like they won't go away, as they sometimes become intricately woven fabric as they become entwine within your deepest  emotions and feelings. As you blame thyself and doult your own ability to love, from the depth of  your own heart and soul sending you subliminal messages, while  tormenting your subconsciousness ripping into your spiritual soul. For even though you try to escape the madness of the insanity, you cry in silence away from preying eyes as you hide behind a mask as an disguise to hide your feelings that screams within. Why don't you see what I see of you as I see you not just as a woman, once hurt with inner pain leaving behind scars that runs deeper than deep. For I see you not as a woman who has been abuse, mentally and emotionally and physically and spiritually for you are not invisible to me. For I see in you a fighter and a warrior as you are a survivor, for you have strength and courage as you have  endurance to withstand the weight of the world. For why don't you see what I see of you as I see you through my own set of eyes, for you are beautiful as you are worthy of being treated like a woman. For through your struggles you found your inner voice, that spoke to you through a whisper in the wind telling you that you. Yes you are worthy of self value and self worth and self love, for you are no longer that woman who had a low self-esteem once kick to the curb like trash, for you have reemerge through the storm much stronger and much wiser as a intelligent subconscious minded woman.  
Written by Stoney223 (WOLF BAY33)
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Author's Note
SOMETIMES WE BECOME SYSTEMATICALLY AND THEOLOGY BLINDED, BY THE THOUGHT OF LOVE THAT WE BUILD WITHIN OURSELVES AN ILLUSION OF GRANDNESS, YET NO MATTER HOW IMPERFECT THE RELATIONSHIP APPEARS TO BE AS WE ALL HAVE FLAWS, WE PRETEND THAT ITS JUST A PHASE YET SOMETIMES BENEATH THE SURFACE, UPON LAYERS AND LAYERS OF TURMOIL ARE SCARS THAT CAN'T BE SEEN NOR A VOICE TO BE HEARD, YET WITHIN THE DEPTH OF THE INSANITY YOU SOMEHOW FIND YOUR OWN VOICE AS IT SETS YOU FREE TO SOAR THROUGH THE SKIES RELEASING THE FALCON WITHIN YOU...STONEY BAY
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