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You Look Back

mind-to-mind
we're entwining
I am me in you

you are you in me
we're finding
we're co-creating new

pyramids of power
within a sphere
of glowing light

throbbing pulsing
deep inside where
sensations feel so right...

ecstasy
is far below our
consciousness as one...

you look back
as I look forward
this is why we've come

from distant worlds
and different lifetimes
drawn by an unseen

attractive
and magnetic power
in a swirling beam...

you look back,
I'm still inside
and this is what you see

I'm penetrating
deep within where
you love me to be
Written by bcpoet (Lawrence)
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