The Poeme Tragique

Hi Lozzamus, I think you write has a rather well rendered subtle nuance of emotion to it's well paced unfolding. Excellent use of milieu and details to fill out the dimensions.

I would be thrilled if you would send an audio reading of this to the site's podcast, The Poetcast Project. I think people would benefit from hearing this and the feature may draw interest to your writing on site. If you would be interested, please send an mp3 or mp4, including your screen name and the poem's title, to:

undergroundoutloud@outlook.com

Member participation is the life's blood of the podcast, so I hope you will consider it.

In kindness,
Daniel

Thanks very much, Daniel. I feel honoured to receive such a positive response, and I have responded by sending an audio to the address below.

Thank you we'll look forward to airing it on an upcoming episode of the podcast. 🙏🏻

Dear L,

There is such a frantic undercurrent in your poem. That mad rush of loss and despair one can feel when love is lost. This has its own heartbeat its that palpable.  

Have you ever played this piece? I gave in and up but your reference to the mood using this work is perfection.

I hope you’ll give consideration to Daniel’s invitation for the podcast. You’d be great!  Amazing write. H🌷

Thanks, Honoria. I've never actually tried the Scriabin. The actual piano work itself does not convey such intensity, so I use the title as a general description of a wild and frenetic piano composition.

Best wishes, and thanks again for your positive feedback on my work.