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Cough Syrup and Sprite - The Loser Chronicles
Yeah, you remember
Those gritty nights
Carnival
Arcade
Blow jobs behind the freak palace
Schools out forever
Short skirts
Hand jobs
Dense humidity
Road to nowhere
You always by my side
Those gritty nights
Carnival
Arcade
Blow jobs behind the freak palace
Schools out forever
Short skirts
Hand jobs
Dense humidity
Road to nowhere
You always by my side
Published 14th Jul 2020
Author's Note
Sleazy nights too long ago beaming with loser pride
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14th Jul 2020 11:59pm
as those days are over now get in the shopping malls a nickel gets you a small smile a 5 dollar bill get you the hand jive a 20 bill get you all you want
well done
well done
15th Jul 2020 2:20am
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16th Jul 2020 4:08am
16th Jul 2020 5:08am
And the carnival ride was the one sane moment that happened all night.. it actually felt like a real date instead of me losing my innocence ( dig the similarity to my own similar story, when I was 16 ) The picture took me back..
16th Jul 2020 12:19pm
I do the image first and then write around it
Sometimes the story jumps out at me and this was one of those times....
I'll bet you were a wild child back then
Thx PR
Sometimes the story jumps out at me and this was one of those times....
I'll bet you were a wild child back then
Thx PR
23rd Jul 2020 3:38am
It also made think of other soft drinks, summer in full swing. Nice color scheme.
23rd Jul 2020 11:26am
Yeah, I do the mage first and then write around them
Never know how it's going to play out
Carnivals have lots of stories
Thx
Never know how it's going to play out
Carnivals have lots of stories
Thx
