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A Liquor State of Mind

That urge
That feeling
After two to three days sober
It's calling
How could you forget
That feeling
Hard liquor
Burning the opening
Of your throat
Others cringe
While the master drinkers
Tilt their bottles up with pride
No time for playing
No room for
Drinks on the rocks
Real drinkers
Straight with no ice
The full effect
Time well spent
In the first few minutes
Total bliss
With a touch of authority
Nobody can defeat
The person with liquor
On their breath
What is said
Stands
Unless you want to hear
Adult baby talk
With a touch of
Stuttering and the slur of words
Blah, blah
B,b,b, blah, blaaaah
Right before
They down some more
Maybe a quiet drinker
Or a Saturday night live
Talking so much
Can someone please
Take their drink away
If you dare
Or there will be
A mental warfare
Or maybe physical
If it escalates
Then more liquor
Will get consumed
Because
The life of a drinker
One
Is never enough
Written by Chuck (Chuck Todd)
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