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Are you OK?
Are you OK?
Nobody knows
Too many feelings
I didn't want to show
You seem different
Than you were before
Like another person
Just walked through the door
Wide eyes
Wild stare
Looking far away
For something that's not there
Gotta make myself
Put on a show
Play that character
Everyone knows
Which is the real me
I wish I knew
I'm one whole person
Divided into
Am I OK?
I don't know
Two personalities battle
But which is the foe
Nobody knows
Too many feelings
I didn't want to show
You seem different
Than you were before
Like another person
Just walked through the door
Wide eyes
Wild stare
Looking far away
For something that's not there
Gotta make myself
Put on a show
Play that character
Everyone knows
Which is the real me
I wish I knew
I'm one whole person
Divided into
Am I OK?
I don't know
Two personalities battle
But which is the foe
Published 9th Jul 2020
Author's Note
This is about struggling with depression but still having to make yourself get out and live your life.
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9th Jul 2020 10:51pm
Too many feelings - yes - there’s nothing quite as humbling as the experience of stumbling across a particularly poignant fabric softener commercial, featuring some small children and maybe a teddy or two, and being moved to heaving sobs.
9th Jul 2020 11:40pm
24th Aug 2020 4:41am
Excellent. We're all pretty much in the same boat, different persons all in one, depending on ''XYZ''
24th Aug 2020 10:51am
Yeah, everyone has their own struggles. The key is dealing with it and still living life.
30th Nov 2020 9:51pm
1st Dec 2020 1:57am
1st Dec 2020 5:58am
Are we ever really okay?
Any of us? 😔
I know this feeling all too well, especially recently.
Thank you so much for putting this out there.
It is a great read to remind the reader that we are all human, and though it may seem impossible...many others truly feel the same.
❤
Any of us? 😔
I know this feeling all too well, especially recently.
Thank you so much for putting this out there.
It is a great read to remind the reader that we are all human, and though it may seem impossible...many others truly feel the same.
❤
1st Dec 2020 9:58am
28th Mar 2021 11:31pm
A question that everyone only expect one answer "yes"...this is a very deep poem due to the fact that we all battle with two personalities everyday...who you really are and who people wants us to be
28th Mar 2021 11:36pm
8th Sep 2021 5:28am
It’s such a common question yet rarely honestly asked or answered. I like your take on it.
8th Sep 2021 10:04am
