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They Said ~ You’d Be Back
sitting here across the ocean
watching a beautiful sunrise
with warm tide kissing my toes
your promised words written with luv
upon purple lined clouds so beautiful
glistening brighter than the rarest gem
drawing hearts in wet sand reminds me
when we carved our initials inside a heart
made vows to one another for eternity
drizzling soft warm tear drops from above
I’m looking forward to the day we dance
once again under Angelic tears of rejoice
will never give up on your promise of luv
I’ll be waiting for a wave bringing you to me
cause I believe the last words you wrote......
They Said ~ You’d Be Back!!
Copyright © 2020 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
watching a beautiful sunrise
with warm tide kissing my toes
your promised words written with luv
upon purple lined clouds so beautiful
glistening brighter than the rarest gem
drawing hearts in wet sand reminds me
when we carved our initials inside a heart
made vows to one another for eternity
drizzling soft warm tear drops from above
I’m looking forward to the day we dance
once again under Angelic tears of rejoice
will never give up on your promise of luv
I’ll be waiting for a wave bringing you to me
cause I believe the last words you wrote......
They Said ~ You’d Be Back!!
Copyright © 2020 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
Published 9th Jul 2020
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- Edited 24th Mar 2025 3:45pm
9th Jul 2020 3:24am
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10th Jul 2020 3:02pm
Hey Lily........a beautiful soft sigh it is........thank you........purple luv & hugs xo :)
9th Jul 2020 3:57am
10th Jul 2020 3:03pm
Hey IS.......thank you for your thoughtful words........made me smile........purple luv & hugs xo :)
9th Jul 2020 9:20am
Just hoping I feel that belief in someone. Really beautiful, touching I loved the Purple references.
Great job, I've read this over and all I can do is sigh
Ron x
Great job, I've read this over and all I can do is sigh
Ron x
10th Jul 2020 3:05pm
Hey Ron.......thank you for sharing a sigh with me.........I’m living in memories........purple is an inspiration to me.......opens my visual imagination.......honored by the RL........purple luv & hugs xo :)
9th Jul 2020 4:21pm
A wonderful, hopeful verse laced with melancholy of distance, Pur'plyFloweredOne. Listen to your heart before you tell him goodbye. xo
10th Jul 2020 3:07pm
Awe Avahati.......precious words you leave me.......I’m not say those words ever to him.......he will always live in my heart and soul........thank you my friend........purple luv & hugs xo :)
10th Jul 2020 3:41pm
Ends with an air of hope, topical at time we in UK are thinking of visiting beaches with no doubt more appreciation.
10th Jul 2020 3:49pm
Hey Solomon........so appreciate your visit and smile upon my ink.......I would luv to visit a beach.......very inspirational.......I hope you get to visit one soon........thank you.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
7th Aug 2020 6:07pm
10th Aug 2020 1:14pm
Hey Dreamz........thank you for your visit.......perhaps one day silence will be broken.......glad you enjoyed.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
5th Dec 2020 1:06am
if any one could steal from lil one
then it can be the purple one
but dare not so do
purple will be the first one to kill you
tc purple suits
lil1 only
to even think of touching her
anyone incl again
would be silly
then it can be the purple one
but dare not so do
purple will be the first one to kill you
tc purple suits
lil1 only
to even think of touching her
anyone incl again
would be silly
13th Jan 2021 1:25am
Hey Again....been gone for awhile so I’m not sure what you mean by your comment........my words and feelings are my own.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
26th Jan 2021 5:13pm
mixed up
I thought u were she
lil one may
be sorry no
ur the purple one
the only purple flower
be ye
bhapppyyyyyyyyy
I thought u were she
lil one may
be sorry no
ur the purple one
the only purple flower
be ye
bhapppyyyyyyyyy
30th Jan 2021 3:17am
Poetic Bro.......I am only flowergirl.......i have no reasons or need to be another on here......I learned long ago to me and only me. How could you think I was another.......you’ve known me a long time.......when others turned you away I became your friend.......way back when.......will always be........purple luv & hugs xo :)
8th Feb 2021 4:08pm
Yeah i suppose so u've been away for long so may have mxd up score out poetic sis
15th Feb 2021 5:13pm
My Poetic Bro.......I understand......hope you are well......keep on inking 💜
16th Feb 2021 3:32am
