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Love is Metaphysical
Written by
Ahavati
(Tams)
Published 8th Jul 2020
| Edited 23rd Jul 2020
Author's Note
2nd Place, RobUmanoid's S-O-C Minimalism: Visceral Bleed To Metaphysical Gold
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/11475/
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Re: Re. Love is Metaphysical
11th Jul 2020 7:48pm
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Anonymous
8th Jul 2020 8:37pm
* inhales the wonderfiul aroma conjuctured up from choice words and great imagery *
The title contains its own wonderful rhyme and the entire poem is reinforced with plenty of Z consonance and I assonance.
Love being an unobservable force in the Universe, yet those who burn can move Heaven and Earth with it alone.
❤📝💻📷
The title contains its own wonderful rhyme and the entire poem is reinforced with plenty of Z consonance and I assonance.
Love being an unobservable force in the Universe, yet those who burn can move Heaven and Earth with it alone.
❤📝💻📷
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11th Jul 2020 7:49pm
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8th Jul 2020 8:53pm
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Re. Love is Metaphysical
9th Jul 2020 3:13am
Dear A,
Very nice indeed! Ethereal actually. Picture and poem so beautifully crafted and blended. I love the concept and I actually just learned what metaphysical means. Win win! Lovely write. H🌷
Very nice indeed! Ethereal actually. Picture and poem so beautifully crafted and blended. I love the concept and I actually just learned what metaphysical means. Win win! Lovely write. H🌷
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11th Jul 2020 7:50pm
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9th Jul 2020 3:28am
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11th Jul 2020 7:50pm
Thank you, John. Much appreciated, and nice to see you back in this neck of the woods.
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9th Jul 2020 5:53pm
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11th Jul 2020 7:51pm
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9th Jul 2020 10:07pm
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10th Jul 2020 12:03pm
“Amongst those who burn...” THAT was like a hammer to the head. Bravo! 👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾✌🏾
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11th Jul 2020 7:52pm
Thank you, my friend. So nice to see you pop back into this neck of the woods. It's greatly appreciated.
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Anonymous
10th Jul 2020 3:25pm
Wow Avahati.......beautifully done.......few words yet so powerful.......enjoyed....,,purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re. Love is Metaphysical
19th Aug 2020 1:38am
Love does indeed have its own scent - not just physically but emotionally. And yes, love can burn. Isn't that a beautiful image? Our love as smoke, wending our way through the world to the one (s) we love?
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19th Aug 2020 1:40am