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Germ Cell
Because they suffered
we will too,
we'll just be
better at it and
able to withstand more.
A thanks or a fuck you?
Not sure which is in order.
we will too,
we'll just be
better at it and
able to withstand more.
A thanks or a fuck you?
Not sure which is in order.
Published 8th Jul 2020
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8th Jul 2020 7:36am
Like this but always like short poems they are the ones that tend to pack a punch
8th Jul 2020 8:05am
8th Jul 2020 8:39am
Dear N,
Your write has me thinking of this virus and that we are resilient and not going to let it get thr better of us. Your photo makes me think of the armor we wear to keep the enemy virus down. That’s my story...and I’m sticking with this version...great write. H🌷
Your write has me thinking of this virus and that we are resilient and not going to let it get thr better of us. Your photo makes me think of the armor we wear to keep the enemy virus down. That’s my story...and I’m sticking with this version...great write. H🌷
8th Jul 2020 12:05pm
I guess any lesson is worth it if we learn. We say fuck it at our own peril. 🥰
8th Jul 2020 5:39pm
the first stanza is such powerful .. n taking one to the core of creation & evolution across timelessness traverse... i feel this all spiritual more than any other dimensions.. the last stanza is a stark truth & a slapped in realizational deathly blooming pain... one of you bests.. encompasses a theme that is highly unique & elevating & yet upto the grounded feltness .. well done Nik!
9th Jul 2020 5:18pm
Natural selection is what first came to my mind about this one, Nikki. Right before herd mentality and survival. Gotta agree with Uma too. . .very spiritual relations throughout this one.
11th Jul 2020 4:49am
Like Ahavati said, natural selection, I'd like to add with a little luck (and fate) we're bound to get through this. That and always proceeding with caution.
Thought provoking piece nikki.
Thought provoking piece nikki.
