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Did I do enough?

Dreams, visions
Finding my way to Eden
The lost are lying
Along the path, dying
With burning blisters
And scorched tongues
Screams, cries
Please don't let me die
Familiar faces stretch their arms
Pleading for reprieve from harm
Questions rise and fly
Why didn't you tell me?
Why didn't you tell me, why?
Scratch, claw
One by one they fall
To the fiery depths below
Forever tortured with other lost souls

As I reach Heaven's gate it opens wide
Yet I find it hard to step inside
Kaden_Malis
Written by Kaden_Malis (Kaden Malis)
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Author's Note
I wrote this after feeling I may not have been the best witness for God to those around me. I constantly struggle with sin but I do believe that Jesus died for my sins and has forgiven me. But I...
I wrote this after feeling I may not have been the best witness for God to those around me. I constantly struggle with sin but I do believe that Jesus died for my sins and has forgiven me. But I still feel remorse for those that I may not have shared my beliefs with. I do believe in God and try to live my life accordingly but I still have my faults and struggles with sin everyday. But I know I by believing in God that I will see him in Heaven one day.
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