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Night Calling
Downtown
Deserted streets
Lone doorway
Calling you
Electronic haze
Trance
Ambient
Sexual
Night speak
Grind
Getting off
City lights
Beckon you
Full stop
Deserted streets
Lone doorway
Calling you
Electronic haze
Trance
Ambient
Sexual
Night speak
Grind
Getting off
City lights
Beckon you
Full stop
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Re. Night Calling
6th Jul 2020 8:28pm
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6th Jul 2020 8:49pm
Re. Night Calling
6th Jul 2020 9:03pm
I don’t know that it’s what you were going for here, but I find something gritty about this. And I mean gritty in the most best and sexual way possible.
Love it
xx
Love it
xx
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Re. Night Calling
6th Jul 2020 9:06pm
This is gritty
Good call E
There are parts of the city that only speak at night. That language is need.
You got what I was going for ...
Thx xx
Good call E
There are parts of the city that only speak at night. That language is need.
You got what I was going for ...
Thx xx
Re. Night Calling
7th Jul 2020 1:44am
Alluring. I thought for sure I must have read that word somewhere in the poem or in a comment, but no, it actually just got planted in my head by looking at it. The olives, the googly eyes, the nipples, the lights... the colours...
Alluring. I love it.
Alluring. I love it.
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Re. Night Calling
7th Jul 2020 1:51am
There's a part of the city that becomes vacant at night and behind all those dark storefronts lies a nether world where people go to forget about life for awhile .....
Love your comment k
Love your comment k
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7th Jul 2020 9:14am
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7th Jul 2020 5:25pm
Re. Night Calling
7th Jul 2020 12:24pm
Is it me ... or are there eyeballs in there ... nice gritty (I agree with Eerie) ...
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Re: Re. Night Calling
7th Jul 2020 1:06pm
A lot of people are seeing different things
It's the wonder of dots
Yes, gritty for sure !
Thx L
It's the wonder of dots
Yes, gritty for sure !
Thx L
Re. Night Calling
Anonymous
7th Jul 2020 12:32pm
I have a beautiful image of a place I have never been a glimpse at New York at Night.
You might enjoy: Night people by John Cooper Clarke, which delves in Manchester and London England night.
You might enjoy: Night people by John Cooper Clarke, which delves in Manchester and London England night.
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7th Jul 2020 1:07pm
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Anonymous
10th Jul 2020 10:03pm
Hi,
Night people is a poem. John cooper Clarke is an eccentric Gem of a poet and one of the biggest inspirations to me. I enjoy your poems and abstract art.
Night people is a poem. John cooper Clarke is an eccentric Gem of a poet and one of the biggest inspirations to me. I enjoy your poems and abstract art.
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10th Jul 2020 10:08pm
Re. Night Calling
8th Jul 2020 8:44pm
Not sure why I thought of the old song Electric Avenue, but again your color and word association tends to do that with your pieces.
Excellent work sir.
Excellent work sir.
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Re. Night Calling
8th Jul 2020 9:00pm