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The way
he
beckons me
to
straddle
his starry
night
always
leaves me
breathless
and
gushing
firmly pinned
beneath
the heat
of
his rock
hard
devotion
and
the weight
of his
worries
are
deeply driven
into
my
whole
being
as I urge
him
to use
my
flesh
to release
his
underlying
tensions
and
the way
he ferociously
takes what’s
his
leaves me
weak
at the
knees
as my
tight
wet
glistening
soul
reacts to
the way
his
lips trail
my
velvety bud
as he
devours
me
holistically
whilst
anchoring
himself
deep within.
he
beckons me
to
straddle
his starry
night
always
leaves me
breathless
and
gushing
firmly pinned
beneath
the heat
of
his rock
hard
devotion
and
the weight
of his
worries
are
deeply driven
into
my
whole
being
as I urge
him
to use
my
flesh
to release
his
underlying
tensions
and
the way
he ferociously
takes what’s
his
leaves me
weak
at the
knees
as my
tight
wet
glistening
soul
reacts to
the way
his
lips trail
my
velvety bud
as he
devours
me
holistically
whilst
anchoring
himself
deep within.
Published 5th Jul 2020
Author's Note
I’m surprised she didn’t smell you, all over me..
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5th Jul 2020 4:40am
5th Jul 2020 5:59am
Like a hot knife through butter, a keen linear razor, right down the page.
5th Jul 2020 6:36am
5th Jul 2020 7:24am
Like your use of very short lines, helps reader to savour what is said. Favourite chunk:
the heat
of
his rock
hard
devotion
and
the weight
of his
worries
are
deeply driven
into
my
whole
being
as I urge
him
to use
my
flesh
to release
his
underlying
tensions
Noting your footnote, that's the sort of sex that should leave his smell on you (as well as on himself)!
the heat
of
his rock
hard
devotion
and
the weight
of his
worries
are
deeply driven
into
my
whole
being
as I urge
him
to use
my
flesh
to release
his
underlying
tensions
Noting your footnote, that's the sort of sex that should leave his smell on you (as well as on himself)!
5th Jul 2020 8:10am
8th Jul 2020 10:20pm
26th Jul 2020 3:15am
Brief but so full of imagination and engagement. Thanks for sharing. Peace. oral
Anonymous
- Edited 7th Sep 2022 7:45pm
8th Feb 2021 5:35pm
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