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Senryu
THE DELICATE SOUND
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THE DELICATE SOUND
During our phone call
Light cracks thru the heavy clouds-
“I can hear your smile”
Written by
SatInUGal
(Kumar)
Published
3rd Jul 2020
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dedicated to Ms Jag, who uttered the last line.
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Re. THE DELICATE SOUND
brokentitanium
(k.)
3rd Jul 2020 7:32pm
Aww... you do have a way of making me go all mushy in very few words.
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SatInUGal
(Kumar)
3rd Jul 2020 7:50pm
thanks k. Me and the wonderful lady in this poem are both dealing with horrible hurdles that have come up in our lives, and our relationship has taken a back seat.
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Re. THE DELICATE SOUND
Ahavati
3rd Jul 2020 8:57pm
I agree with BT. You're a true minimalist, Kumar.
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Re: Re. THE DELICATE SOUND
SatInUGal
(Kumar)
3rd Jul 2020 11:02pm
I would welcome a good longer poem these days. Just none comin' to me.
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