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today
i went to the dentist
because they said
they could fix my smile

i went inside
and sat on the chair
they put things in my mouth
while i lay there and ached

it was a lovely purple room
and she wore lovely purple gloves

just before sunset
i went home
but it seems
even the dentist could not find
my smile
Written by jztc (sailoranne)
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Author's Note
that one time i didnt want to go to the dentist because i was sad
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