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Words as cold and sharp as an iceburg

Like the iceburg slicing through the titanic I heard your words and my heart sank.
Like the ocean your ice cold presence froze me in my place due to the shock my mind went blank.

Like the lack of life boats all I have are broken pieces of the girl I used to be,
Theres nothing that can save me.
Written by TrueLover (Meganne)
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