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she smiled.. again

entering an amusement park,
we both chose the middle aisle
i stopped and said  “ladies go first”
it was a single file,
 
then.. there was a spark
in the form of a smile,
a pilot was lit..
that had been out for a while,
 
pink stick and lite shadow  
i like a subtle style,
a 9 out of a 10
on my eye appeal dial..
 
i knew she couldn’t be single,  
there’s no way that I could win,
I ask “you with someone..  
aren’t you with a friend”
 
“Yes” she said “i’m with someone”..  
i thought that was the end,
“i’m with my cousin” she said
“she is like my best friend”,
 
she asked “who are you with..
you with someone too”,
i replied “i was alone”..  
“maybe an early trip home  
but now I’m with both of you”,  
 
she turned her head and tilted it up..  
to get a better view..
 
she smiled.. again..  
which turned into a grin,
 
that’s when I positively knew
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.. for “L”
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