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Straight To The Point (a heady collaboration with seductress poet Sky Dancer)
Baby, I'm hearin' you're good for the soul
I'm thinkin' my flesh would go nice with your bone
I'm a little aggressive, but, fuck, how I slide
cause I’m feelin' your wavelength, and I want you inside
Delicious blunt words, erect coital pole
tongue savors hot juices that drip from each tone
mind-blowing, decisive, piquant sexy scent guides
wet pink parted lips on stiff glistened rod glide
Beats like a poet, hot tempo flair
Your rhythm's my pace, our hot groove affair
I felt you in colours, the wide vibrant strings
my alter of cunt needs your stone offering
Primal, passionate cries split Summer air
our sweat makes bare skin gleam, wets hair
rhythmic collisions make slapping skin sing
ample boobs keeping time with up-down bobbing
Slick tongues tango in moonlit rite
rain batters the rooftops, you're a beautiful sight
I’m drenched in this moment, illicit flirtation
as you pull in my ass feel my tight saturation
Lightning strikes, libidinous friction electrify the night
deeply, below in paradise planted, thin lips envelop tongue so tight
tryst blessed by thunder's consent, ass beckons take the dare
innocent to that puckered place, tentatively I worship there
They say fortune favours the brave, my dear
and those who don't explore will be enslaved by fear
Here, let me take you to a deeper zone
Where secrets are borne and knowledge is shown
I'm thinkin' my flesh would go nice with your bone
I'm a little aggressive, but, fuck, how I slide
cause I’m feelin' your wavelength, and I want you inside
Delicious blunt words, erect coital pole
tongue savors hot juices that drip from each tone
mind-blowing, decisive, piquant sexy scent guides
wet pink parted lips on stiff glistened rod glide
Beats like a poet, hot tempo flair
Your rhythm's my pace, our hot groove affair
I felt you in colours, the wide vibrant strings
my alter of cunt needs your stone offering
Primal, passionate cries split Summer air
our sweat makes bare skin gleam, wets hair
rhythmic collisions make slapping skin sing
ample boobs keeping time with up-down bobbing
Slick tongues tango in moonlit rite
rain batters the rooftops, you're a beautiful sight
I’m drenched in this moment, illicit flirtation
as you pull in my ass feel my tight saturation
Lightning strikes, libidinous friction electrify the night
deeply, below in paradise planted, thin lips envelop tongue so tight
tryst blessed by thunder's consent, ass beckons take the dare
innocent to that puckered place, tentatively I worship there
They say fortune favours the brave, my dear
and those who don't explore will be enslaved by fear
Here, let me take you to a deeper zone
Where secrets are borne and knowledge is shown
Published 29th Jun 2020
Author's Note
I had not done a collab. in quite some time so when invited to do so by Sky Dancer I thrilled at the thought of combining my words with hers she being a provocative power-house. I am pleased with how well our words meshed. Dear lady thank you for the Sky high❣❣😊
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29th Jun 2020 7:11pm
3rd Jul 2020 11:02pm
Thank you so much, Soledad❣❣I hadn't done one in a while so it was fun and I needed some passion.
29th Jun 2020 7:50pm
This is a nice melt of the two voices. Both provocative and tastefully done. Nice work
3rd Jul 2020 11:05pm
Thank you very much, Julia❣❣ I always appreciate when my erotica is deemed tastefully done. My aim. Is to accentuate the beauty of the experience😘
29th Jun 2020 8:18pm
Nice combination - so seamless you would think it was coming from one person alone, her. Favourite verse:
Primal, passionate cries split Summer air
our sweat makes bare skin gleam, wets hair
rhythmic collisions make slapping skin sing
ample boobs keeping time with up-down bobbing
Primal, passionate cries split Summer air
our sweat makes bare skin gleam, wets hair
rhythmic collisions make slapping skin sing
ample boobs keeping time with up-down bobbing
3rd Jul 2020 11:07pm
Solomon, as always I appreciate the compliment. Yes, we did mesh well.
29th Jun 2020 8:20pm
Sky has a gift of changing styles that i absolutely cannot tell who created what passage. Well, 'til...
"I felt you in colours, the wide vibrant strings
my alter of cunt needs your stone offering"
Cunt and British spelling gave it away.😉
I can clearly see your verbiage took reign and she followed{ imo}. Congratulations to you both, y'all created a most seductive and sizzling piece. This bravissimo goes to you two horny, but oh so lovely f'rs. ♨️💋
"I felt you in colours, the wide vibrant strings
my alter of cunt needs your stone offering"
Cunt and British spelling gave it away.😉
I can clearly see your verbiage took reign and she followed{ imo}. Congratulations to you both, y'all created a most seductive and sizzling piece. This bravissimo goes to you two horny, but oh so lovely f'rs. ♨️💋
3rd Jul 2020 11:15pm
ThNk you dear Pandy❣❣ I seem to be perpetually horny and Sky certainly brought it out more powerfully in me. She took lead and we alternated every stanza. I decided for cohesiveness to follow her rhyme scheme. She came hot right out the gate and I just tried to match that heat.😘
You guys were a perfect match then. I haven't done a collab since one with J
{ Juvie } over a year ago. I followed his lead and it was so terrible, I didn't post it on my profile.😅 It wasn't cohesive such as this although many liked it.. Of course, he's gone now so it's dead. Thank God! It takes a special zing to create a collab and I've had it only once. Sigh...
{ Juvie } over a year ago. I followed his lead and it was so terrible, I didn't post it on my profile.😅 It wasn't cohesive such as this although many liked it.. Of course, he's gone now so it's dead. Thank God! It takes a special zing to create a collab and I've had it only once. Sigh...
6th Jul 2020 10:11pm
7th Jul 2020 6:17am
Sounds cool. 😮 I'm horrible with leads, but I can probably whip up something. Give me a day at least.....
Busy week.💋
Busy week.💋
29th Jun 2020 11:12pm
3rd Jul 2020 11:17pm
Thank you sir Ron! I truly enjoyed your collaboration with Sky as well.
3rd Jul 2020 11:20pm
Thank you she was a dream to write with. It was my first collaboration I loved it
25th Jul 2020 5:30am
This read tongue in cheek yet passionate as a torch in the night. Loved the chemistry between you two that glowed like the galactic halo. There is magic in the air here and I am most fortunate to have read this. Uplifting words of sensual abandon to fill my lonely hours.
John
John
25th Jul 2020 5:43am
John, what a fantastically poetic comment! These two passages are rich,
"passionate as a torch in the night."
"chemistry between you two that glowed like the galactic halo."
I"ll check out your poetry.
Cheers!
"passionate as a torch in the night."
"chemistry between you two that glowed like the galactic halo."
I"ll check out your poetry.
Cheers!
