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My Diamond
You told me who you were
A diamond
I fell, hard
For all the beauty
Of our love....
You gave me crazy butterflies
Thinking it would last forever
believing all your stupid little lies
The connection was already severed
Just words, I see now
I almost gave everything, up for you
And you let me go like I was nothing
It's a shame
How much of my life I almost gave away
For you....
You hurt me
And you don't even care
But it is your fault, don't you see?
When I opened up
You were never fair to me
I cry for you still....
And you lay in bed with your new "pet"
Doesn't matter anyway
Good riddance....better her, than me
But hey, what can I say
You did wrong
Never took accountability
You always said "stay positive"
But all you ever did was hurt me
And now our love is gone
You broke me, I think
I will never be the same
So yes, it is true
Don't you see....
Yes I hate you
This write has been painful indeed
The flower you once made bloom
Shrunken back down
Into a seed
Underground....
Now, for your love
There is no room
Now....I must heal
A diamond
I fell, hard
For all the beauty
Of our love....
You gave me crazy butterflies
Thinking it would last forever
believing all your stupid little lies
The connection was already severed
Just words, I see now
I almost gave everything, up for you
And you let me go like I was nothing
It's a shame
How much of my life I almost gave away
For you....
You hurt me
And you don't even care
But it is your fault, don't you see?
When I opened up
You were never fair to me
I cry for you still....
And you lay in bed with your new "pet"
Doesn't matter anyway
Good riddance....better her, than me
But hey, what can I say
You did wrong
Never took accountability
You always said "stay positive"
But all you ever did was hurt me
And now our love is gone
You broke me, I think
I will never be the same
So yes, it is true
Don't you see....
Yes I hate you
This write has been painful indeed
The flower you once made bloom
Shrunken back down
Into a seed
Underground....
Now, for your love
There is no room
Now....I must heal
Published 24th Jun 2020
Author's Note
For the "First Love" DUP Comp.
With true emotions I proudly write this poem.
With true emotions I proudly write this poem.
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24th Jun 2020 2:38pm
when you fall hard for a master in disguise you fall hard for the disguise..
is it better to have loved and lost than not loved at all
first love, future expectations, love loss heartache
despair, anger, resentment
nice style and flow, metering
painful
nice piece
respect
is it better to have loved and lost than not loved at all
first love, future expectations, love loss heartache
despair, anger, resentment
nice style and flow, metering
painful
nice piece
respect
24th Jun 2020 3:07pm
26th Jun 2020 3:59am
This is heartwrenching, but very beautifully written. You're on the right path... Keep your distance and heal up good. I'm sorry you had to deal with that, but rest assured, you will bloom again ❤️
-NewB
-NewB
26th Jun 2020 5:12am
