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Like smoking; Self-injury is a mental distraction,
It eventually becomes an automatic reaction.
Like a bird; I’m trapped inside a cage,
Surrounded by the bars of my mental stage.
It eventually becomes an automatic reaction.
Like a bird; I’m trapped inside a cage,
Surrounded by the bars of my mental stage.
Published 20th Jun 2020
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20th Jun 2020 9:20pm
Impacting in it's brevity. Perhaps the most syllabic fluidity you've offered thus far. Great write.
21st Jun 2020 4:53am
Dear M,
Like an arrow through my heart, your piece is a bullseye in emotional pain resulting in self harm. How well I know this dark tango. You have managed to beautifully express what this dark subject is like. Amazing write. H🌷
Like an arrow through my heart, your piece is a bullseye in emotional pain resulting in self harm. How well I know this dark tango. You have managed to beautifully express what this dark subject is like. Amazing write. H🌷
26th Jun 2020 2:32am
