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7 year old me wrote a poem
I love the smell of lilax
It is my favorite smell
But if there was no lilax
There would not be any smell
It is my favorite smell
But if there was no lilax
There would not be any smell
Published 19th Jun 2020
Author's Note
I didn't say it was good. But my spelling improved!
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19th Jun 2020 10:24pm
OMG! You're serious! I thought it was going to be one of those "To my Seven year-old self" poems! This was just what I needed today!
Lilax! Love it! I enjoy them as well; the scent is heavenly.
Lilax! Love it! I enjoy them as well; the scent is heavenly.
20th Jun 2020 00:19am
Forgot to mention that it went to the tune of "My Hat it has Three Corners"....
Good luck getting it out of your head now!!
Good luck getting it out of your head now!!
19th Jun 2020 11:11pm
20th Jun 2020 00:20am
My brilliance was astounding. I've always felt quite gifted at stating the obvious...
19th Jun 2020 11:37pm
Dear B,
Absolutely priceless as well as astute. I’m pretty sure my seven year old self was nowhere near this developed in existentialism.
Love the phonetic spelling for lilax- which makes way more sense than lilacs. Adorable! So glad you shared this. H🌷
Absolutely priceless as well as astute. I’m pretty sure my seven year old self was nowhere near this developed in existentialism.
Love the phonetic spelling for lilax- which makes way more sense than lilacs. Adorable! So glad you shared this. H🌷
20th Jun 2020 00:22am
Not sure I was particularly astute - just couldn't think of any way to make a rhyme other than repeating the same words!!
Thanks :)
Thanks :)
20th Jun 2020 1:28am
20th Jun 2020 3:06am
