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Drowning In A Puddle
Her pretty face
his petty heart,
it was never as deep
as it was shallow.
his petty heart,
it was never as deep
as it was shallow.
Published 19th Jun 2020
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19th Jun 2020 6:46pm
Love it!! I quite enjoyed your minimalist approach here... It's clever, and speaks volumes in it's brevity. Great writing 🙏
19th Jun 2020 8:02pm
19th Jun 2020 10:57pm
19th Jun 2020 7:15pm
Dear N,
Petty and pretty only get you so far. So busy trying to maintain the image it exhausts any possibility of establishing anything real and long lasting. Another great write my friend. H🌷
Petty and pretty only get you so far. So busy trying to maintain the image it exhausts any possibility of establishing anything real and long lasting. Another great write my friend. H🌷
19th Jun 2020 8:02pm
19th Jun 2020 8:15pm
